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Created for 1421 Haiku contest offered by Brian Strand

 

1421

Shafts of lazy light
Autumn shades cascading down
Combines comb the fields
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Dear Beau, your beautiful haiku captures the essence of autumn. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Barberis Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 9:31 PM
Thank you for the kind words!
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 11:08 AM
You have captured a beautiful picture in this haiku! Loved it.
Barberis Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Thank you for the comment!
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Love this! Congratulations on the win
Barberis Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
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