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grapevine moths
partake in daily tours
free wine tastings

insecthaiku

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Susan Ashley

October 25, 2025 at 10:25 AM

Dear Christine, a wonderful and light-hearted haiku! The way moths flit about, kind of in a tipsy way.. love it ;) Great last line! You capture a moment in Nature with poetic finesse. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Christine Watts

October 25, 2025 at 2:22 PM

Hi Susan Thank you so much for your lovely review and congratulations They are much appreciated Cheers Christine