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flurry of snowflakes,
         waltz down in swivelling steps~
                  sun saw their last dance.

8th gradedancesnowhaiku

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William Kelii Kekaula

October 22, 2025 at 10:37 AM

Mesmerizing depiction presence, breath-taking, Aloha.

Hilda Greenhough

October 20, 2025 at 9:46 PM

This is a very descriptive haiku. Good luck with the contest.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

October 20, 2025 at 10:07 AM

Dear Valsa, a breath of winter it tis, s delicate, fleeting, and wonderful. Beauty witnessed, endings honored, and the dignity of transience. Just like a light on frost. Autumn Blessings, Dear Valsa, Daniel