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faded ~ your portrait 
on canvas of scattered paints 
yet mem'ries still fresh

artmemorysenryu

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Eve Roper

April 29, 2026 at 8:10 PM

this is such a heartfelt poem... as an artist art is a frozen time in the past that stilll lives.

Sara Kendrick

November 4, 2025 at 12:11 PM

Congratulations on this winner. A very nice one for us to read. Way go to. I want to say thank you for the placement I received in your contest. Thank you for reading my work and finding it worthy of a place on your winners' list. Sara K

Susan Ashley

October 11, 2025 at 5:41 PM

Dear JCB, I adore the contrast of "faded" and "scattered paints" with "mem'ries still fresh". The imagery is tender yet vivid of the loss of someone special. Congratulations for your wonderful win! Warmest wishes, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan