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13 Years

13 Years Rolling wheels, Through fields of heather, Browns and purples, Steel blue of cold, Regimented act of military manoeuvre, It's perpetrators oblivious of its repetitive farce. As we enter this erie caledonian mist, A sleepless and dream like state, From our early sojourn and departure, Our purpose to reach a distant grave, Accomplished under cover of night. Dreams of fresh, crisp, loch pine air, Diluted with local village coal, A visit made in tribute, To a lost or unspent soul. Differing feelings of mourning, Expressed with silent thoughts, the drifting scent of roses, As they bob gently from the shore, An incident barely spoke of, Just great sadness....disbelief, Has become a surreal transcendental feeling, More of spiritual connection than of grief! Copyright S.Rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/28/2018 6:00:00 AM
Wow, sorry I didn't read this sooner. Very good. Thank for sharing your pen.
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Date: 12/20/2015 10:14:00 AM
gosh, is this the event that I am thinking of that happened in the USA? Or could it be another one? FOr me, I have felt such disbelief and dread over the last 13 to 14 years as I have seen unbelievable things happening in my government and in the world. Maybe I am off base with the poem's meaning, but that is how it made me feel! Your writing is superb.
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Date: 12/20/2015 10:10:00 AM
Oh, my, you saw two of my poems. That was kind of you! Now I will see two of yours! But I don't want to run out of things to see. You don't have many up here yet. I am glad to see you getting involved in the Soup community.
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Date: 12/14/2015 11:18:00 PM
Hi, Stuart, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2015 3:16:00 PM
Hi Stuart, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/12/2015 10:07:00 PM
Stuart Rose,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Stuart Rose
Date: 12/13/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments and positive feedback.

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