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life term under ground

                                            sentence served

                                        moment     in the sun







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Anisha Dutta

June 1, 2018 at 10:47 AM

Good to know about cicada

Line Gauthier

May 28, 2018 at 2:30 PM

Wow - awesome, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 28, 2018 at 3:58 PM

Thank you! :)) xomo

Paul Callus

May 28, 2018 at 11:17 AM

Having looked up info about these cicadas I can fully understand the joy they experience when released from their very long underground prison, Maureen! In summer I get cicadas in my garden, and love the sound they make:) Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 28, 2018 at 1:47 PM

Aren't they fascinating! :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

April 22, 2018 at 7:18 PM

As much as I love this poem, I'm sure glad it's just a moment (singular) in the sun. Those buzzing, wing-beating pests! Great write, Maureen! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 23, 2018 at 8:15 AM

Thank you Gerson! I'm guessing where you are you get the periodic cicadas, often called locust. We get annual Dog Day Cicadas, bigger and far far fewer. I love 'em! xomo