12 Bar Blues

Gimme some dat twelve bar blues	
bucket of beer, some otha booze
sluice you from my mind.

Wake up late with an achin head
bleary eyes and feelin half dead
none of you to find.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 30, 2014 at 4:38 PM
DAVE, Congratulations, on your win... Always & Forever...... Linda
Rodgers Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thanks Linda
Green Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 2:48 PM
And I am certain half of America (more like 90 %) has been through this! LOL- this is why country music is so popular, great job!
Rodgers Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Thanks Amy
Mehta Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Very lovely poem. Congratulations on a fine win, roger
Rodgers Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Thank you
Johnson Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 6:59 PM
I really like this one. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Rodgers Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:53 PM
Joyce , Thanks and I do hope the weather improves
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 5:39 PM
awesomely done, just like singing the blues!!
Rodgers Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:00 PM
So right - and congrats on your win too
Johnson Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Been there done that. Where did everybody go? Your first line reminded me of the first line ot the George Harrison song on his last cd. Congrats Roger.
Johnson Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 12:18 AM
He says: Gimme plenty of that guitar.
Rodgers Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Thanks,it seems to be a common experience,at least for blues aficionados. I'm not all that familiar with GH's post Beatles works - the only one that come to mind is My Sweet Lord.
Johnson Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 2:24 PM
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March 17, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Roger, where Iive, we extend blues poems like this and read them with jazz bands, very nice.
Rodgers Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Romella, thanks this was a contest entry and one tail rhyme was the limit. It may still be open if you wish to submit.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 9:22 AM
There are some things no amount of booze can wash away. Yet still we try.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 11:20 AM
I would go with Otha it denotes slurring speech.
Rodgers Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 11:17 AM
True this was for a contest, and a fun from to play with, still debating if it should be other or otha
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