120 Words - Life

LIFE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the love of my life, life, its depth, its range, how rife. from high up in the air, to here and there, to where life finds a niche, takes hold! from small, to big and bold! long to tall, thin like thread, take care where you might tread! life not seen on the ground, look hard, it can be found. you might need a gem loop to stoop you must, to scoop, a gem of life so small no lens, not seen at all a wasp less than a mill so cool what a great thrill life, large, so big, so huge no tree, no whale, do muse a fun guy ate with meat in soup, like life, a treat! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
2/6/18 Entered in '120 words' - Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One Point of interest: Fun guy, fungi, personified! For those who don't know: A species of fungi found in the forests of North America can exceed 6 kilometres in diameter, but less than a mil at its thinnest and not much over at its thickest. It is the true fungi. Mushrooms, toadstools, are its fruiting bodies. Hyphal being their root-like structure, which produces their fruit. One other interesting point is that they are considered scientifically, to be closer to animals than plants, what say the Veegans?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Great job, Mick.
Talbot Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Thank you Normie, appreciated... Best wishes... Mick
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Mick, enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme to make a have way good poem .. Hugs Eve
Talbot Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Eve, Thank you on both counts... hugs... Mick
Ashley Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:39 AM
An awesome and compelling write about life Mick. Life is everywhere as you so eloquently and enticingly expressed. Congratulations on your excellent win my friend! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Talbot Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Susan, Most grateful, thank you... Mick
Y. Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Hi Mick, This is such a well written piec. Thanks your notes they were educational. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Talbot Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Alexis, Thank you, so happy you found my note helpful too... Mick
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:15 AM
I think you are a fun guy, Mick. Congrats on your win.
Talbot Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Line, Thank you, and putting a smile on anyone's face puts a smile on mine... Mick
Cunningham Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations Mick. Regards Tom
Talbot Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Tom, Many thanks... Mick
One Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Great choice for the contest Mick.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
Talbot Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Silent, Many thanks, keep em coming... Mick
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace