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10 Lines Five Words

I walk the path where leaves are strewn, and there beneath the trees, I hear the sound of footsteps near As you come into view your smile brightens the day And though skies are gray You bring sunshine my way As rain begins to fall We hear distant thunder call -- 12-26-17 Contest: 10 lines 5 words Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 12/30/2017 6:10:00 PM
Wonderful piece, happy new year to you and yours
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Date: 12/30/2017 2:23:00 PM
- My best wishes for a peacefull and happy new year, and I thank you for your friendship through the year 2017, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/30/2017 8:09:00 AM
This is so nice Joseph. Well written! :)
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Date: 12/30/2017 4:47:00 AM
Soft and beautiful, Joseph:)
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:03:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. I really Realy like it :) Good luck in the contest Joseph! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:44:00 PM
So nicely done, Joseph. I really need to do this one fast!!! I have seen a few and yours is leading the pack!!!
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Date: 12/27/2017 3:12:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Joseph - Even wet and cold rain becomes romantic with your words :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2017 12:24:00 PM
I love a rainy day! Your poem has a beautiful subdued romantic flavor to savour! : )
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Date: 12/27/2017 11:21:00 AM
Nice!! This is perfect!
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Date: 12/27/2017 8:40:00 AM
You did this challenge very well Joseph..
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Date: 12/26/2017 9:03:00 PM
Joseph, this is beautiful, luck in the contest hugs eve
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Date: 12/26/2017 7:56:00 PM
Such lovely sentiments wonderfully expressed, Joseph. Well done! ~Susan
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Date: 12/26/2017 6:53:00 PM
Hi Joseph, It was a pleasure to read the lovely. Nice content and imagery. I found it to be romantic as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/26/2017 5:29:00 PM
Oh so much in these lines Joseph,,awesome poetry
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Date: 12/26/2017 4:28:00 PM
This looks hard to do with 5 words--but your poem rhymes well--best for a win Joseph.
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