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Promises I haven’t kept yet Float in day’s dusty dusk, I tell old sun wait Don’t set until I ask. Memories enter year’s last night Lie somewhere in domain unknown My dawn new sun lights Dreams dazzle in uplifted horizon. Music of life I’ll hear I promise the New Year.
December 29, 2017.

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Date: 1/23/2018 1:56:00 PM
A beautiful written poem. Congrats on your win. Have a nice day my friend.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/25/2018 2:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene for reading and appreciating.
Date: 1/3/2018 3:51:00 PM
Awesome, Subimal. I really enjoyed your poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/4/2018 12:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line for your nice words.
Date: 12/31/2017 10:04:00 PM
Subimal, congrats on your win and happy New Year! Janice
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/31/2017 11:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice.
Date: 12/31/2017 9:04:00 PM
Subimal, such enthralling imagery captivates in your hopeful write. Congratulations on your fine win.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/31/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Susan for liking the poem.
Date: 12/31/2017 8:41:00 PM
A hopeful verse! Congrats, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/31/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 12/31/2017 8:30:00 PM
caught my eye right away. Beautiful poem sweet Subimal, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/31/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Laura for your appreciation.
Date: 12/29/2017 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/30/2017 2:50:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. Happy New Year to you.
Date: 12/29/2017 5:09:00 AM
Ooh this is amazing imagery; I can almost see words floating at 'dusty dusk' All the best in the contest! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/30/2017 2:49:00 AM
Thank you, Senha for appreciating and for your nice comments. Happy New year to you.

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