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when the moon is hot and the sun a cooling the stars lose their shine when the clouds a fooling. when one is in love the whole world’s a grooving her frame fits the glove when her body’s a moving. in a moment of muse she sure lit my fuse. © Harry J Horsman 2017

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Date: 2/1/2018 11:56:00 AM
:)Love it! Great write, Harry!
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Date: 1/30/2018 12:30:00 PM
Lol love that ending Harry!
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Date: 1/14/2018 3:39:00 AM
superb xx
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Date: 1/1/2018 1:46:00 PM
Harry, you are the man. I just find your writings inspiring.
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Date: 12/30/2017 6:19:00 PM
Loved this...well done good luck
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Date: 12/29/2017 8:50:00 AM
You did this very well Harry, nice rhymes.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 12/29/2017 6:32:00 AM
cute ...
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:59:00 PM
Your poem is well written harry.. this form looks hard to write..yet you managed your rhymes well.
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:41:00 PM
oh you got a cute little love poem out of those five word lines .Very nice and to see you doing contests. I LOVE that, Harry
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Date: 12/28/2017 6:27:00 PM
Your words dance off the page harry I really enjoyed your rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2017 5:55:00 PM
Lively, appealing piece, Harry! Janice
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