10 Lines 5 Words

when the moon is hot
and the sun a cooling
the stars lose their shine
when the clouds a fooling.

when one is in love
the whole world’s a grooving
her frame fits the glove
when her body’s a moving.

in a moment of muse
she sure lit my fuse.

© Harry J Horsman 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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DiMino Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 11:56 AM
:)Love it! Great write, Harry!
Thomas Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Lol love that ending Harry!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 3:39 AM
superb xx
Blanca Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Harry, you are the man. I just find your writings inspiring.
One Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 8:50 AM
You did this very well Harry, nice rhymes.. Good luck in the contest..
Stars Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 6:32 AM
cute ...
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Your poem is well written harry.. this form looks hard to write..yet you managed your rhymes well.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 7:41 PM
oh you got a cute little love poem out of those five word lines .Very nice and to see you doing contests. I LOVE that, Harry
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Your words dance off the page harry I really enjoyed your rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Lively, appealing piece, Harry! Janice
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