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10 Hours

I count the hours as I welcome the pelt of rain harmoniously thumping and splattering against the melancholic chug-chug screech of the train 10 hours of not being assaulted by your words hours devoid of your loudness yet my heart is screaming, banging, drumming 10 piercing hours time does not escape your noise

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Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 9:14:00 PM

HARPER, Awesome Poem, thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2015 7:41:00 PM

Harper, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Eurydice Oo

Date: 9/16/2015 5:59:00 PM

So raw....beautifully written yet painful to read.

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/15/2015 3:25:00 PM

Hey Harper, a warm and hearty welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a deep and introspective poem revealing a agitated spirit searching for moments of peace. I'm looking forward to more of your poems. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva

Skat A

Date: 9/15/2015 1:35:00 PM

Harper, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT