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043013 My Soul

Holding a mask in front of your face long enough you forget who you are. The problem is I grew up thinking I couldn't express myself not knowing my eyes tell them all. I try and try to put these feelings in words that others don't comprehend at all. The moment one knows the truth, off my life they are. I can't seem to find the one who desires me at all. My thoughts are filled with darkness that creeps, I can't accept this. Telling my mind I'm complex when reality says I'm nothing at all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/18/2013 11:11:00 PM
Wow ghazal refrain type poem! A superb presentation. Pensive poetic finer. I hope u read my latest too.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:56:00 PM
i should probably start learning types of poetry lol thank you for reading and commenting and sorry for the late reply -divine
Date: 11/18/2013 7:40:00 PM
wow.. Divine, this is very deep. my soul is very hard to predict... Love this case.. LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:56:00 PM
sorry for the late reply but thank you for reading love -divine

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