03-01-2011

sea shells singing songs
while waves wash weary worn weeds
echoing eons 

posted 3/1/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 10:12 AM
step away from the alliteration....;) ease off a wee bit, best of luck, you have made marvelous progress as a poet! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Good alliterations Jimmy. Good luck in Chris's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Also, this is a magnificant alliteration Haiku, Jimmy. Number one in my books. Lainie To my fav's!
George   Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:59 AM
You a a master of Haiku's dear Jimmy. Such powerful images and emotions conveyed. Lainie
Haick Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 2:23 PM
You've painted a beautiful picture here, JAM. If this is for Chris's Contest, good luck! Looks real good! Love, Annalise
Wilson Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Hey we both did one about sea shells..great minds etc.etc...lol good luck Jimmy..Love,Deb
Poet Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Wonderful Haiku with Alliteration--kashinath
Mehta Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 10:16 AM
beautiful alliteration with good expression on sea shells. Jimmy
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