03-01-2011

silly silent sheep
merrily munching in march
glittery green grass

slow slugging shepherd
crouches carefully nearby
wistfully wishing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Chappell Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 1:16 AM
very good i like it
Freeman Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:04 AM
Great alliterations Tahera, surely do well in Chris' contest. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Hey Tahera, quite a lovely entry for Chris's contest, good luck to you :) Hope your week is going better :)
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 12:24 AM
very good Alliteration here Tahera.A grand entry into the contest-kashinath
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 8:23 AM
love it, best of luck in Chris's contest
Sweetheart Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Super Alliteration Tahera.. check your date luv.. u have it reversed .. did u mean ..03-01-2011?? good luck in the contest luv..
La France Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 5:44 AM
I think it is wonderful, now I see how this type of haiku is done, love it, best of luck in the contest~~
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