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“HALO THE WARRIOR” #1**Unicorn Valley** * Land of purple hues simple, sweet innocent eyes rises from the east ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ #2**Guile of Disciples** * Magic gathering hides away from the darkness horn found on the ground ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ #3**Beautified Dreams** * Enchantment of life ancestral home broken-down adorn the unicorn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ #4**Freedom Quest** * Liberty or Death Unicorn celebration Epic battle won ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ by;PD

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Date: 3/8/2015 1:26:00 PM
Lovely string of Unicorn haiku! Re no4...both liberty and death provide freedom in their own way. hugs // paul
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Date: 6/20/2014 5:20:00 AM
Some really great lines in here. Loved the way you weaved the four individual Haiku to create a fantastical tale. Who needs 3+ hour Hollywood epics?!
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:47:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work here. Thanks for posting, Jancarl
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Date: 9/29/2013 7:00:00 PM
Very magical indeed. I could learn a thing or two from you on the Haiku poems. Nice write. !Kilimer
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:17:00 PM
I really like the magical style ... very nicely structured with great imagery :)
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Date: 7/19/2013 10:57:00 AM
Love your poems!!! Wonderful work there!
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Date: 6/23/2013 12:01:00 PM
Nice Haiku. A nice read.
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Date: 6/7/2013 2:29:00 PM
I believe there were unicorns! Light & Love
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:46:00 AM
Very nice sets of haiku. Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/14/2013 1:45:00 AM
excellent haiku... Please check your inbox for my soupmail.~A.O
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Date: 3/4/2013 8:54:00 AM
very impressive write sweet poetess Linda :) love your works so much <3 <3 <3 hugs Sk
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Date: 2/25/2013 8:35:00 PM
Love your imagination (: Excellent and descriptive set of haikus, glad I chose this one tah read. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:19:00 AM
Glad i stopped by pd. My favourite one is Unicorn Valley nd guile of disciples though i do love them all
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Date: 1/16/2013 11:11:00 PM
Love your haiku's,,,,, Thank you for your nice comment on my " Missing Pieces " I thought I'd never hear from you again, nice surprise,,,, have an awesome PD ;}
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:57:00 PM
hey there, PD. What's up, sweetie?
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Date: 12/19/2012 8:36:00 PM
This is beautiful and touching. Thank you Linda - you are one of a kind. Many blessings today and always. Lucy
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Date: 12/18/2012 7:33:00 PM
love the magic this poem makes me feel thank you for sharing it and thank you for all your wonderful post on my writing I just put two more on because you inspired me to write down the thoughts in my head about a very special man I meet thank you so much your friend Nita
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Date: 12/3/2012 4:52:00 AM
Dear PD...thank you for sharing your brilliant work..am honor to read all you brilliant writes...wishing you all the best with luv and hugs...<3<3<3 SK
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Date: 11/27/2012 12:01:00 AM
liberty or death... is very powerful... emotion burns, fight the good fight, triumph over adversity, its our bloody right! give it to em p.d.:)
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Date: 11/24/2012 1:18:00 PM
Hey PD: I like this poem a lot. I really connected with the #4 Freedom Quest, bravo!!!. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my little poem. Hope your had a great Thanksgiving!
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:13:00 AM
A magical and mystical sequence of poetry every word carefully considered... Thankyou for your kindness of thought, word and wishes for this 'thanksgiving time of year' for yourselves... Not a holiday celebrated here but appreciated none the less... and wishing you the very best with many thanks also... Such a blessing to be amongst such great writers and friends whatever stage they be at. Looking forward to many more years of learning amongst everyone too! Kindest thoughts and wishes...
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Date: 11/22/2012 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful haiku series carry beautiful thoughts uncommon to me. Thanks....., loved always, bl
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Date: 11/22/2012 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much dear PD for your very nice greetings. It's also my great honor to be a part of PS family and to know great poets like you whom I considered my teacher. I learned a lot from your poems with different forms. thanks for your friendship. This is one of the best blessings I have received this year. Happy Thanksgiving to you and to your family. hugs and kisses from me (^___^) Maria
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:27:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely wish, dear PD!!! Have a very Happy Thanksgiving too!!! My life turned into a nightmare that I could have never fathom...I am starting Life from scratch, zero after awful events. That is the reason I was not very active lately in the Poetry Soup. Anyway I hope I'll get back when this nightmare fades away. Pray for me!!! Love you, Iolanda
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Date: 11/19/2012 7:41:00 PM
i see your unocorn craze is still up! nice write!! on soup after a really long time... -apoorva do visit my blog if you like to read fiction stories http://fictionworldbyap.blogspot.in/
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