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- the Game Is Over -

I know her shoelaces do not have loops
They may be used as spaghetti in soups
A girl who dreams, are tired of getting hurt
Each kiss and hug felt right, but she kept alert

Her words on paper, dreams of a better place
A frustrating feeling has participated in the game with grace
Accepting does not mean losing hope, the eagle is flying high
Her eyes were always smiling, now she whispers goodbye











24.08.2017
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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 8/28/2017 6:41:00 PM A gorgeous poem, Anne-Lise. So well crafted and w/plenty of emotional depth and heft. The woman's plight moves the reader to tears (of joy too.) Your graceful pen writes again. Lovely poetry. Love and peace always. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2017 2:06:00 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/27/2017 7:31:00 PM oh it ends so sad, Anne Lise. I liked the imagery you used in this one. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2017 2:56:00 AM - Yes, I know it's a sad end Andrea - Glad you liked the beautiful picture above my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/27/2017 2:55:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, i have never believed in goodbyes. This is such a sad yet hopeful poem. It is written with your usual gentleness that brings out the emotions so well. I know you shall always keep penning, your beautiful words shall always flow. Hugs....Mike. XX. Goes into my faves. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/27/2017 3:11:00 PM - Dear Mike, I love the line from Maria; "there should be no goodbyes, only hellos" - Goodbye is difficult and painful ... - Really glad you like this poem - Without hope ... life has no meaning - Many thanks for your faithful visit, a fave and lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/26/2017 7:17:00 AM A sad write, Anne-lise, but a lovely picture:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2017 3:40:00 PM - Many thanks Jo, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Becca Teagan Date: 8/25/2017 11:22:00 PM "accepting does not mean losing hope" - this line spoke to me. We should never lose hope. Keep smiling, dear one. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2017 3:39:00 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Becca :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor Date: 8/25/2017 4:20:00 PM Goodbyes are sad and you have captured the goodbye with hope Anne-Lise. Thank you for posting for you are resilient... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2017 3:39:00 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 8/25/2017 7:30:00 AM someone told me once that there should be no goodbyes, only hellos. Good philosophy I think. Anne-Lise another masterpiece, you are truly such a gifted poet. Brilliant and a fave ...Maria xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 2:36:00 PM - Many thanks for a fave on my poem - The Game Is Over -, Maria :) - An honor - Always a pleasure to see you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 8/25/2017 6:53:00 AM Happy to hear you are not leaving Sunshine :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 7:04:00 AM - Thanks, Heidi :) ... hugs

Akkina Downing Date: 8/24/2017 8:26:00 PM Awe, I feel her sadness. But maybe the goodbyes are for the hopes she's dreaming for. Beautiful write Anne-Lise... hugs :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:57:00 AM - Akkina, always sad when someone says goodbye for whatever reason - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 5:43:00 PM I was hopeful in the first stanza--sorry to see that she lost her hope and dreams--well done capturing her feelings, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:55:00 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Shaw Date: 8/24/2017 4:35:00 PM Powerful and emotional, regards, Kevin Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:51:00 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 8/24/2017 4:30:00 PM Never lose hope Anne....hope this is not goodbye... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:50:00 AM - "Accepting does not mean losing hope, the eagle is flying high", Joseph - (I changed a little on this line) - No goodbye, my friend - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 8/24/2017 3:32:00 PM Sunshine. ...Oh my word, this is very sad. I really, truly hope you are not leaving the site.? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:46:00 AM - No, Heidi ... I have just paid for lifetime membership ... not easy to get rid of me :))) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 8/24/2017 3:28:00 PM I sincerely hope this is not goodbye Anne Lise because then the bullies have won:-( :-( hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:36:00 AM - "bullies" can NEVER win, Jan - They are cowardly and hypocrites - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 8/24/2017 3:11:00 PM This is sad. No goodbyes Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2017 4:38:00 AM - Always sad when someone says goodbye, Tim - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)