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I know her shoelaces do not have loops
They may be used as spaghetti in soups
A girl who dreams, are tired of getting hurt
Each kiss and hug felt right, but she kept alert

Her words on paper, dreams of a better place
A frustrating feeling has participated in the game with grace
Accepting does not mean losing hope, the eagle is flying high
Her eyes were always smiling, now she whispers goodbye











24.08.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 8/28/2017 6:41:00 PM
A gorgeous poem, Anne-Lise. So well crafted and w/plenty of emotional depth and heft. The woman's plight moves the reader to tears (of joy too.) Your graceful pen writes again. Lovely poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 8/29/2017 2:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 7:31:00 PM
oh it ends so sad, Anne Lise. I liked the imagery you used in this one.
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Date: 8/28/2017 2:56:00 AM
- Yes, I know it's a sad end Andrea - Glad you liked the beautiful picture above my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 2:55:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, i have never believed in goodbyes. This is such a sad yet hopeful poem. It is written with your usual gentleness that brings out the emotions so well. I know you shall always keep penning, your beautiful words shall always flow. Hugs....Mike. XX. Goes into my faves.
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Date: 8/27/2017 3:11:00 PM
- Dear Mike, I love the line from Maria; "there should be no goodbyes, only hellos" - Goodbye is difficult and painful ... - Really glad you like this poem - Without hope ... life has no meaning - Many thanks for your faithful visit, a fave and lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 7:17:00 AM
A sad write, Anne-lise, but a lovely picture:)
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:40:00 PM
- Many thanks Jo, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2017 11:22:00 PM
"accepting does not mean losing hope" - this line spoke to me. We should never lose hope. Keep smiling, dear one.
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:39:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Becca :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2017 4:20:00 PM
Goodbyes are sad and you have captured the goodbye with hope Anne-Lise. Thank you for posting for you are resilient...
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:39:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2017 7:30:00 AM
someone told me once that there should be no goodbyes, only hellos. Good philosophy I think. Anne-Lise another masterpiece, you are truly such a gifted poet. Brilliant and a fave ...Maria xxx
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Date: 8/25/2017 2:36:00 PM
- Many thanks for a fave on my poem - The Game Is Over -, Maria :) - An honor - Always a pleasure to see you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2017 6:53:00 AM
Happy to hear you are not leaving Sunshine :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:04:00 AM
- Thanks, Heidi :) ... hugs
Date: 8/24/2017 8:26:00 PM
Awe, I feel her sadness. But maybe the goodbyes are for the hopes she's dreaming for. Beautiful write Anne-Lise... hugs :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:57:00 AM
- Akkina, always sad when someone says goodbye for whatever reason - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2017 5:43:00 PM
I was hopeful in the first stanza--sorry to see that she lost her hope and dreams--well done capturing her feelings, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:55:00 AM
- Many thanks Vijay, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2017 4:35:00 PM
Powerful and emotional, regards, Kevin
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:51:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2017 4:30:00 PM
Never lose hope Anne....hope this is not goodbye...
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:50:00 AM
- "Accepting does not mean losing hope, the eagle is flying high", Joseph - (I changed a little on this line) - No goodbye, my friend - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2017 3:32:00 PM
Sunshine. ...Oh my word, this is very sad. I really, truly hope you are not leaving the site.?
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:46:00 AM
- No, Heidi ... I have just paid for lifetime membership ... not easy to get rid of me :))) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2017 3:28:00 PM
I sincerely hope this is not goodbye Anne Lise because then the bullies have won:-( :-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:36:00 AM
- "bullies" can NEVER win, Jan - They are cowardly and hypocrites - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2017 3:11:00 PM
This is sad. No goodbyes
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:38:00 AM
- Always sad when someone says goodbye, Tim - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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