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- Soft Swan Wings -

You are a jeweled gift sparkling diamond rock temple One of thousand in the world touched petal by petal Skies above true blue wrapped cotton white emotions Arches over our earthly plains east to west one circle Inside silk ribbon feelings tie the knot perfectly With wings of a swan bound unto you eternally In you who crowns the heart with passions ignite magic When the sky was falling into the promised land chants Carnation of a flower deeply stirring dewdrops rose In light of the rainbow mountains shone glitter dust Loving you morning and night never goes out of fashion Amor helped to ignite flames that burn purely with love A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 07.09.2016 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Space Cadet

Date: 9/26/2016 11:57:00 PM

I dig this. I read this a few times, and I accidentally omitted the last couplet and transposed the "Carnation..." couplet with the "In you who..." couplet. It reads beautiful in more than one way. Thanks for sharing. W

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2016 2:39:00 PM

This is such a lovely collaboration from both of you! Congratulations on POTD! ; )

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2016 5:02:00 PM

Very nice from both of you congratulations on Poem of the Day to both

Paul Callus

Date: 9/11/2016 3:44:00 PM

I already had the pleasure of reading and commenting on Anne-Lise's page; once again well done to both of you, this time with added congrats for p.o.t.d. Regards // paul

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/11/2016 1:24:00 PM

Congrats for POTD. Enjoyed..............//:) hugs//Manmath.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/11/2016 9:34:00 AM

Hi Liam and Anne- Lise!:)) Wow! Congratulations to you both on POTD!A most very beautiful outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!You both deserve this great honor.I' m so very extremely happy for you.Well done!Just awesome!Enjoy your whole day!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/11/2016 9:27:00 AM

Liam and Anne-Lise, I told you guys that this one was a "Keeper"!! Way to go on receiving the POTD honor here. Of course, TR/FAV for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/11/2016 7:20:00 AM

Back to say Congratulations on POTD. I read this earlier on Anne-Lise's page. Another beautiful collaboration for the both of you:)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/11/2016 5:26:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD!So beautiful..:) Sunita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2016 5:19:00 AM

- CONGRATULATIONS ...... HOORAY !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2016 5:56:00 AM

- A pleasure to share this poem with you, my friend Liam :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/9/2016 6:42:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^