- Show Me Your Face -

Do not hide your face
                                    Let me see your beautiful eyes
                                          Do not hide your tears
                                          Let me wipe them away
                                         Do not hide your wounds
                                             Let me comfort you
                                            You should know that
                                             you are not alone 
                                    Do not be subdued by falsehood
                                          jealousy and backstabbed
                                       Raise your head and be proud
                                       Show me your face your grief
                                   No one has the right to judge others
                                   They must sweep for their own door






15.04.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:29:00 PM
A very sensitive poem, Sunny. A lucky person is he/her who receives such loving attention.
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Date: 9/28/2017 2:32:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/22/2014 9:14:00 AM
A wonderful write my friend. Wise words and great talent.. BBBBBRAVOOOO!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/22/2014 9:27:00 AM
- Robert, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 3:23:00 PM
They must sweep for their own door to have the right to judge others, and most that judge, do not sweep. Like much of your verse, it's quite hopeful, content. :) w
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Date: 4/13/2014 4:04:00 PM
- Wesley, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/23/2013 12:34:00 PM
Lovely piece...kp it up..am impressed..Tomdoc
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Date: 9/23/2013 12:40:00 PM
- Oluwatomiwo, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2013 2:27:00 PM
I wish there were more good friends out there like you! A good friend is sometimes hard to find! This poem was very heartfelt and genuine. I really enjoyed reading it!...Wonderful work!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2013 2:29:00 PM
- Kelly, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/4/2013 6:58:00 PM
What a friend you are and support for those around. Great person and a poem of friendship like no other.
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Date: 6/5/2013 1:33:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my poem, really appreciate your comments, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/17/2013 9:27:00 AM
What a beautiful write my friend! Love it!
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Date: 5/17/2013 11:08:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Bethany. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/11/2013 6:23:00 AM
i love this!!! it is so genuine :) to stand by each other in the best and worst of circumstances...this is real love! :) thank you anne lise...this is beautiful and so encouraging!!!
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:45:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Cortney. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/7/2013 7:01:00 AM
Well done. Great read.
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Date: 5/7/2013 8:05:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Matthew, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2013 7:40:00 PM
You know how to raise the spirit with such uplifting push of strength... All of us need a hand one time or the other.. Lucky are those who are near you for I am sure you would be a great support to them. This poem is touching humanity in its core! Well written!
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Date: 5/1/2013 3:06:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Guru, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2013 4:26:00 AM
I felt like hiding for quite some time but being on this site has helped me a lot. Your words are beautiful. Thank you. Betty I have you as a favorite.
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Date: 4/29/2013 4:27:00 AM
- Thank you Betty !!! - Enjoyable with a visit from you , your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/28/2013 4:32:00 AM
Anne, my dear, you are always around with an encouraging word... Thank you.... Jake
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Date: 4/28/2013 5:40:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you John, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/25/2013 7:59:00 PM
Thank you for your inspirational piece. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It made me feel free and liberated.
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Date: 4/26/2013 1:08:00 AM
- Pleasant with good support, your visit makes me happy Valerie. - thanks - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2013 11:44:00 AM
So true thanks for the invite! You gave some very good points in the poem.
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Date: 4/22/2013 11:47:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Robert, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/20/2013 12:14:00 AM
spoken like a true friend... :)
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Date: 4/20/2013 1:36:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you B.E.S, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2013 5:54:00 PM
Some people do hide themselves away just from fear of being judged. A thoughtful and kind write Anne. Hopefully it will give people the courage and insiration they need. And yes for others to sweep their own door. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/20/2013 1:35:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Richard, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2013 10:23:00 AM
So sensitive and caring. Loved it.
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:31:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Betty, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/18/2013 4:05:00 PM
Anne Lise; This is very beautifully written. You are very kind and sweet. Many blessings...... Lucilla
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Date: 4/19/2013 1:39:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Lucilla, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/18/2013 3:01:00 PM
great write Anne,really nice and great message too. God bless, Gordon
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Date: 4/19/2013 1:38:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Gordon, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/18/2013 11:35:00 AM
nicely penned Anne...best wishes
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Date: 4/18/2013 11:42:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Joseph, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2013 5:52:00 PM
This is really a tender poem, I love them, really makes me calm by reading those encouraging verses :) wishing you a lovely day Anne :) hug, Yanny
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:15:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Yanny, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2013 3:24:00 PM
Well, I love those words Anne - Lise, xo's
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:14:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Debbie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2013 11:14:00 AM
I love it, Anne-Lise. Yes, be God-like. We can't judge others. it's not our job. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 4/17/2013 11:16:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Toquyen, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2013 10:58:00 AM
This poem will go into my fav. Lise Anne. We should never judge others and we should look under our own door. Love it. love phyl
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Date: 4/17/2013 11:05:00 AM
Thank you for fav. Phyllis ! -- Enjoyable with a visit from you, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2013 6:32:00 AM
What a lovely and well written voice of encouragement, Anne Lise. Love it. -Red
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Date: 4/19/2013 5:21:00 AM
Excuse me, Red! - But "Rosa" is a beautiful name also ..... sorry
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Date: 4/17/2013 7:08:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Rosa, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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