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29.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 320 - footprint -

                                          every step erased
                                       incoming tide mystery - 
                                            the gordian knot
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Date: 4/2/2024 4:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem to leave one thinking of this powerful message : ) hugs
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:32:00 PM
Anne-Lise, love this. Indeed we can't stop the flow of nature. Only nature itself will do it, although we might try. And this is only the tip of the iceberg.
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:37:00 PM
Anne-Lise, a great haiku, love the mystery of the footprint being erased by the waves. -Hugs
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Date: 3/31/2024 1:21:00 PM
What a great Haiku write with a great picture. I love the beach but no beach near me. Hugs... Have a blessed day/week...........................
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Date: 3/30/2024 3:14:00 PM
I like this one. Amazing what water can do to change the shoreline. I enjoyed reading your Haiku. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. What kinds of birds are in your area. Sara K
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Date: 3/30/2024 1:37:00 PM
Love it! Footprint completely erased.
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:59:00 AM
You are so good at these.. this is brilliant once again..
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:00:00 AM
Another awesome Haiku from you dear friend, but whatever form you write in, and you are quite adventurous with all and any different forms and competitions in which you do so well. Hope you are enjoying your change of seasons and getting ready for your summer. Lots of love to you, often think of you. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/29/2024 1:28:00 PM
There will come a time when all mankind's footsteps will be erased. Happy Easter Anne-Lise, just back from travelling again. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 3/29/2024 11:22:00 AM
What a gorgeous picture youve used for this haiku. A deep and touching one that is so well crafted and delivered. I love “ incoming tide mystery” that hits strong . Pleasure always reading your work. Hope easter holidays are going well. Sending you light always
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