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- Haiku X 163 - the Stone Age -

many stones lifted

                                     a cemetery for loss

                                      rest your wheels - amen







* NOT FOR CONTEST
07/09/2019
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Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/10/2019 2:51:00 AM Gorgeous poem, terrific photo. Wondering where it is! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2019 3:01:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/9/2019 5:39:00 PM you certainly captured that picture!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2019 2:59:00 AM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry Date: 9/9/2019 8:28:00 AM An image lives forever specially in a poem so imagery... congrats alkas. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2019 2:59:00 AM - Thank you very much, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 9/8/2019 10:13:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, well, here I am and what do I see, a HAIKU. A brilliant picture, but, as as usual, an exceptional Haiku. You really know how to write these Anne-Lise. I love the content of this one. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2019 3:00:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 9/8/2019 7:57:00 AM Lovely imagery... resting wheels Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2019 8:00:00 AM - Thank you, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/8/2019 6:18:00 AM Wowie-wow! Great words and pic! You’ve outdone yourself, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2019 6:29:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/8/2019 2:34:00 AM I think this is extremely creative, vivid feeling imagery. Me thinks it is is excellent. Good luck in the contest and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2019 6:28:00 AM - Not for contest, CayCay :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/8/2019 1:51:00 AM Shame - this persons rock built car won't take him far, but maybe in the realm he has travelled to, he has! Unique entry for a contest my friend. Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2019 6:27:00 AM - Not for contest, Jenny :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/7/2019 5:20:00 PM I wonder if that is a final resting place for someone who loved the Volkswagon. Thanks for dropping by. Sara..I enjoyed reading your creative lines. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2019 6:26:00 AM - Sara, many thanks for your visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/7/2019 4:09:00 PM Love it , solid built car won't be going very far though. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2019 6:25:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/7/2019 2:12:00 PM Awesome! Just look at that old Volkswagon. Those cars were built to last forever (had one in college). Very nice haiku and I especially like "rest your wheels...amen." I guess it's the same with people. If for a contest, this creative and unique haiku should do well, Anne-Lise! Hugs, carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/7/2019 3:34:00 PM - No, this is not for contest :) - The advertising was true ... this car will last forever, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)