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A lynx at home.


                                         ignorance is bliss

                                   baby bunny in the woods -

                                         monitored by lynx









05.11.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Syllable : 5-7-5

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Date: 12/14/2018 1:37:00 AM
Any difference between us and Azrael ...
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Date: 12/14/2018 3:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/11/2018 5:22:00 AM
Awesome poem - a naturally grand write -JWE
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:36:00 PM
- Thank you very much, J.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/5/2018 8:47:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, the lynx, is hungry so she is waiting to strike. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/6/2018 2:05:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/28/2018 8:15:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Your metaphor and it's meaning with your Haiku says it all. It points toward the notion of the hierarchy of animals in the concept of evolution. Very ominous indeed for the Baby Bunny!! Superbly done and A FAVE from me!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:08:00 PM
- Hi Gary, many thanks for your visit, fave and the valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2018 8:45:00 AM
A beautiful and dark haiku, Anne-Lise. An instant fav for me. Sending huge hugs your way. Warm wishes~ Warren
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Date: 11/20/2018 12:22:00 PM
- I highly appreciate your lovely comment and the valuable fav., my friend Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2018 2:09:00 PM
Aww so sad but it's survival of the fittest... and there will be more bunnies you know how they breed... I've never eaten rabbit:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/8/2018 1:01:00 PM
- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2018 5:18:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, your words paint such an ominous scene. I think I have to give the bunny a warning. Wonderful Kaiku once more Anne-Lise. You write these so creatively. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/7/2018 2:25:00 AM
- Hi Mike, many thanks for your visit, fav. and the valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2018 12:12:00 PM
quite fatal is time... lovely write from you, anne... happy huggs
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Date: 11/6/2018 2:09:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 6:18:00 PM
In this case, a short lived bliss. Enjoyed this one,Ana lise
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 8:30:00 AM
Ignorance is bliss until he pounces. :) Nicely crafted my friend.
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Date: 11/5/2018 11:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 7:28:00 AM
Shocking truth! Marvelously written dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugsxxx
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Date: 11/5/2018 11:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 6:30:00 AM
Hope the bunny is alert now.. after hearing about your poem. You painted that scene cleverly, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 11/5/2018 7:02:00 AM
- Vijay, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 3:41:00 AM
I was going to say "What a tasty poem!!! " Hugs
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Date: 11/5/2018 5:00:00 AM
- I have never eaten a bunny ... :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 3:32:00 AM
God knows who will be for dinner in this poem...then again a belly may be left hungry today... who's to say... Vivid imagery...All the best Anne- Lise
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Date: 11/5/2018 4:56:00 AM
- I do not think a little baby bunny hunting a lynx, Arturo - But the lynx eats at least one bunny by the day/night :) - Thank you for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2018 1:46:00 AM
Lovely image Sunshine, it seems cruel sometimes but that is nature. Hope the bunny got away. Tom.
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Date: 11/5/2018 1:56:00 AM
- The little bunny was eaten ... with skin and hair - Inspired by a nature movie on tv yesterday :) - A very "sweet" dinner, Tom - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)