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A lynx at home.


                                         ignorance is bliss

                                   baby bunny in the woods -

                                         monitored by lynx









05.11.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Syllable : 5-7-5

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/14/2018 1:37:00 AM

Any difference between us and Azrael ...

Sunshine Smile
Date: 12/14/2018 3:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/11/2018 5:22:00 AM

Awesome poem - a naturally grand write -JWE

Sunshine Smile
Date: 12/12/2018 12:36:00 PM

- Thank you very much, J.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/5/2018 8:47:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, the lynx, is hungry so she is waiting to strike. Have a nice evening my friend.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 12/6/2018 2:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/28/2018 8:15:00 AM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Your metaphor and it's meaning with your Haiku says it all. It points toward the notion of the hierarchy of animals in the concept of evolution. Very ominous indeed for the Baby Bunny!! Superbly done and A FAVE from me!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/28/2018 1:08:00 PM

- Hi Gary, many thanks for your visit, fave and the valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 11/20/2018 8:45:00 AM

A beautiful and dark haiku, Anne-Lise. An instant fav for me. Sending huge hugs your way. Warm wishes~ Warren

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/20/2018 12:22:00 PM

- I highly appreciate your lovely comment and the valuable fav., my friend Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JAN ALLISON

Date: 11/7/2018 2:09:00 PM

Aww so sad but it's survival of the fittest... and there will be more bunnies you know how they breed... I've never eaten rabbit:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/8/2018 1:01:00 PM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/6/2018 5:18:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, your words paint such an ominous scene. I think I have to give the bunny a warning. Wonderful Kaiku once more Anne-Lise. You write these so creatively. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2018 2:25:00 AM

- Hi Mike, many thanks for your visit, fav. and the valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

nette onclaud

Date: 11/6/2018 12:12:00 PM

quite fatal is time... lovely write from you, anne... happy huggs

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/6/2018 2:09:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2018 6:18:00 PM

In this case, a short lived bliss. Enjoyed this one,Ana lise

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/6/2018 7:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/5/2018 8:30:00 AM

Ignorance is bliss until he pounces. :) Nicely crafted my friend.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/5/2018 11:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/5/2018 7:28:00 AM

Shocking truth! Marvelously written dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugsxxx

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/5/2018 11:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/5/2018 6:30:00 AM

Hope the bunny is alert now.. after hearing about your poem. You painted that scene cleverly, Anne-Lise.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/5/2018 7:02:00 AM

- Vijay, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

arthur vaso

Date: 11/5/2018 3:41:00 AM

I was going to say "What a tasty poem!!! " Hugs

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/5/2018 5:00:00 AM

- I have never eaten a bunny ... :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/5/2018 3:32:00 AM

God knows who will be for dinner in this poem...then again a belly may be left hungry today... who's to say... Vivid imagery...All the best Anne- Lise

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/5/2018 4:56:00 AM

- I do not think a little baby bunny hunting a lynx, Arturo - But the lynx eats at least one bunny by the day/night :) - Thank you for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/5/2018 1:46:00 AM

Lovely image Sunshine, it seems cruel sometimes but that is nature. Hope the bunny got away. Tom.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/5/2018 1:56:00 AM

- The little bunny was eaten ... with skin and hair - Inspired by a nature movie on tv yesterday :) - A very "sweet" dinner, Tom - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)