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High Resolution Pictures: Cloud Cumulus is a free photo

- Freely and Easily -

Of my drowsy deep summer dreams ~ pictures in black and white
Divine heavenly clouds floats freely and easily ~ angels floss
My frustration floating through no mans land ~ patience my friend









Sijo
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27.07.2016
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:21:00 PM
A great poem of great outlook, an excellent way to nourish inner thought. Well done my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/18/2016 12:59:00 PM
- Glad you really enjoyed this - thanks for nice visit and beautiful comments, Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/12/2016 5:44:00 PM
Another beautiful write from your pen Anne-Lise. One can just lose ones self within these words. It is the most beautiful dream. Fly among the clouds Anne-Lise, where your beautiful poetry shall always belong. This is a seven and a fave for me. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:22:00 AM
- A pleasure that you enjoy this little poem, many thanks for the comment, a 7 + fav., my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/31/2016 5:30:00 PM
I really like this, Anne Lise. Great job.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2016 7:21:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 2:51:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I enjoyed this lovely write. Well done:-) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 3:13:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 12:32:00 PM
Excellent write! Loved It.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 1:00:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Armand :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 11:15:00 AM
ohh, this is really charming, anne... patience is a virtue!.. happy huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 11:48:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 9:28:00 AM
Cool! Hugs Rick.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 11:48:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 7:52:00 AM
Impressive. Beautiful analogy's and Original. Past my bedtime - but slave to cricket. NZ playing Zimbabwe. David in wrong time zone this morning.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
- Who won ? - Thank you very much, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 6:58:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 7:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 4:40:00 PM
A lovely write Sunshine....hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 7:46:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 4:38:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 7:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 4:23:00 PM
beautifully written, anne lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 7:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 1:44:00 PM
This is a lovely write Anne-Lise.. lovely imagery ;) xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 1:52:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Wilma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 11:47:00 AM
Patience is a must...lovely write A-L
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:04:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 10:39:00 AM
lovely imagery Anne Lise I especially love 'angel's floss' :-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 11:29:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 10:19:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Anne-lise:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 11:28:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 8:51:00 AM
Great imagery and a beautiful picture...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 11:28:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 8:30:00 AM
A wonderful Sijo poem coupled with marvelous picture! Your soul has expressed herself most eloquently dear, Anne-Lise! A seven. Hugs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 11:27:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 8:24:00 AM
I dream in color and usually not too peaceful. It's good you can relieve your frustrations this way. So peaceful! Shows the softness of your heart, Anne Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 11:26:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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