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alone, disappointed, hopeless, girl, lonely




Is there still a rainbow after the rain?
An unanswered message, life is full of lies

Darkness falls - like a thief steals the daylight
I get confused - hear demons whisper

It happened so suddenly, struggling to breathe
Tired of all the things that hurts

If life was an adventure I would love to dance
Everything around me is in a white blur - the truth?








  20.07.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
  (unrhymed couplets)
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Date: 8/12/2016 6:28:00 AM
lovely write !!!..loved the flow dear.
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:26:00 AM
- Nilima, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/3/2016 2:59:00 AM
My dear Sunshine, dance and dance more.... There is a dragon in our path keeps treasures on loan.... Defy the dragon's wrath when love's treasures shone.....
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Date: 8/6/2016 12:07:00 PM
- Thanks Pashang, for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2016 8:40:00 AM
Loved this one!
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:56:00 AM
- Michelle, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2016 6:21:00 AM
I wish to make it in my native language. Will u please permit ?
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:35:00 AM
- With pleasure, but you have to post it in my name - I have the   : Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Let me know when you post it :) - hugs
Date: 7/27/2016 6:18:00 AM
Very good poem; what logic behind first 2 lines ?
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:38:00 AM
- Who can we trust ..... many have many different faces ..... a friend? .... an enemy ? .....an uncertain world - hugs
Date: 7/25/2016 8:06:00 AM
Sorry I missed your POTD. Last week was pretty hectic for me. Congratulations for your write. Yes life is full of lies. How we deal with those lies determines our character. Just dance Anne Lise, it's more fun to be happy!
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:09:00 AM
- Never too late Daniel, nice to see you when you have time :) - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 5:14:00 PM
congrats on your poem selection. nice poem.
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Date: 7/23/2016 6:04:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Umar :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 4:41:00 PM
Anee, Well penned. A big congrats for ur well deserving POTD. A 7 from me........//:) hugs
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Date: 7/23/2016 6:03:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and congratulations, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 3:44:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A TR/FAV here on this deep and very powerful write. And Congratulations on POTD too!! Truth and Falsehood; Light and Darkness; are constant warring companions in this world we call our "mortal existence." Where is and what is the truth?? are constant questions which puzzle many and pervade the human psyche. A most excellent couplet!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/22/2016 3:51:00 PM
- Your comments mean a lot to me, dear Gary - I really appreciate a tr. + fav. from you - Many unanswered questions on our journey - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 10:47:00 AM
Darkness, a part of life. Dark emotional write.
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Date: 7/22/2016 11:04:00 AM
- That is right, James - Appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 9:25:00 AM
Deep write... Congrats for your well deserved POTD....
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Date: 7/22/2016 11:03:00 AM
- Thanks Supraja, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 8:43:00 AM
Lovely words with a deep truth,so happy for you Sunshine,congratulations!
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Date: 7/22/2016 9:03:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 8:27:00 AM
There is so much here in these few lines, powerful thoughts that lie in the darkness of the letters. Grats on this piece being featured as poem of the day!
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:30:00 AM
- Thanks Casarah, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 8:10:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, This a deep thought provoking write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:13:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2016 6:52:00 AM
Great work, congratulations Sunshine on POTD honors...
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:46:00 AM
- Thanks Charlie, that was a pleasant surprise :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2016 11:36:00 PM
This is a fav for me, such intensity! A7
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:53:00 AM
- A pleasure, thanks for a fav. and a 7 Arthur - Always nice to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2016 5:00:00 PM
Very creative work..Expressive and emotive..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:49:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2016 3:19:00 PM
Sunshine Smile, I like your poem. I feel what you are talking about. Good writing. Misty
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:48:00 AM
- Appreciate your comments Misty, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2016 5:08:00 AM
A deeply philosophical couplet my dearest, Anne-Lise! Enjoyed it a lot! A seven!
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:58:00 AM
- Dear Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive your positive comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2016 4:23:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Life to be truth always. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:56:00 AM
- Appreciate your comments Ravi, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2016 6:00:00 PM
i think it's a situation of great frustration caused out of heart broken. Beautifully expressed. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:54:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2016 4:38:00 PM
i like how this was done as the search for truth continues in life, anne... so lovely; happy huggs!
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:51:00 AM
- Nette, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2016 2:47:00 PM
A blessing for life to be truth but temptation is always there to cause havoc. Love the thoughts Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/20/2016 3:48:00 PM
- Words of truth, dear Eve - thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2016 1:49:00 PM
I especially love the second couplet Anne Lise - a wonderful poem:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/20/2016 2:43:00 PM
- Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2016 1:35:00 PM
Oh this is so good A-L...a favorite
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Date: 7/20/2016 2:41:00 PM
- Highly appreciate your comments, a pleasure you enjoy it Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)