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alone, disappointed, hopeless, girl, lonely

Is there still a rainbow after the rain? An unanswered message, life is full of lies Darkness falls - like a thief steals the daylight I get confused - hear demons whisper It happened so suddenly, struggling to breathe Tired of all the things that hurts If life was an adventure I would love to dance Everything around me is in a white blur - the truth? 20.07.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Nilima Deb

Date: 8/12/2016 6:28:00 AM

lovely write !!!..loved the flow dear.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2016 7:26:00 AM

- Nilima, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/3/2016 2:59:00 AM

My dear Sunshine, dance and dance more.... There is a dragon in our path keeps treasures on loan.... Defy the dragon's wrath when love's treasures shone.....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2016 12:07:00 PM

- Thanks Pashang, for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Corbin

Date: 7/28/2016 8:40:00 AM

Loved this one!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2016 8:56:00 AM

- Michelle, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Street Poet

Date: 7/27/2016 6:21:00 AM

I wish to make it in my native language. Will u please permit ?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 6:35:00 AM

Street Poet

Date: 7/27/2016 6:18:00 AM

Very good poem; what logic behind first 2 lines ?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2016 6:38:00 AM

- Who can we trust ..... many have many different faces ..... a friend? .... an enemy ? .....an uncertain world - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/25/2016 8:06:00 AM

Sorry I missed your POTD. Last week was pretty hectic for me. Congratulations for your write. Yes life is full of lies. How we deal with those lies determines our character. Just dance Anne Lise, it's more fun to be happy!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2016 8:09:00 AM

- Never too late Daniel, nice to see you when you have time :) - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Umar Kakamu Aliyu

Date: 7/22/2016 5:14:00 PM

congrats on your poem selection. nice poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2016 6:04:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Umar :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 7/22/2016 4:41:00 PM

Anee, Well penned. A big congrats for ur well deserving POTD. A 7 from me........//:) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2016 6:03:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and congratulations, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/22/2016 3:44:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A TR/FAV here on this deep and very powerful write. And Congratulations on POTD too!! Truth and Falsehood; Light and Darkness; are constant warring companions in this world we call our "mortal existence." Where is and what is the truth?? are constant questions which puzzle many and pervade the human psyche. A most excellent couplet!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 3:51:00 PM

- Your comments mean a lot to me, dear Gary - I really appreciate a tr. + fav. from you - Many unanswered questions on our journey - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 7/22/2016 10:47:00 AM

Darkness, a part of life. Dark emotional write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 11:04:00 AM

- That is right, James - Appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/22/2016 9:25:00 AM

Deep write... Congrats for your well deserved POTD....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 11:03:00 AM

- Thanks Supraja, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/22/2016 8:43:00 AM

Lovely words with a deep truth,so happy for you Sunshine,congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 9:03:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/22/2016 8:27:00 AM

There is so much here in these few lines, powerful thoughts that lie in the darkness of the letters. Grats on this piece being featured as poem of the day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 8:30:00 AM

- Thanks Casarah, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2016 8:10:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, This a deep thought provoking write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 8:13:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/22/2016 6:52:00 AM

Great work, congratulations Sunshine on POTD honors...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 7:46:00 AM

- Thanks Charlie, that was a pleasant surprise :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/21/2016 11:36:00 PM

This is a fav for me, such intensity! A7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 7:53:00 AM

- A pleasure, thanks for a fav. and a 7 Arthur - Always nice to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2016 5:00:00 PM

Very creative work..Expressive and emotive..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 7:49:00 AM

- Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Misty Mccoi

Date: 7/21/2016 3:19:00 PM

Sunshine Smile, I like your poem. I feel what you are talking about. Good writing. Misty

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2016 7:48:00 AM

- Appreciate your comments Misty, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/21/2016 5:08:00 AM

A deeply philosophical couplet my dearest, Anne-Lise! Enjoyed it a lot! A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/21/2016 7:58:00 AM

- Dear Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive your positive comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/21/2016 4:23:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully said. Life to be truth always. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/21/2016 7:56:00 AM

- Appreciate your comments Ravi, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/20/2016 6:00:00 PM

i think it's a situation of great frustration caused out of heart broken. Beautifully expressed. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/21/2016 7:54:00 AM

- Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/20/2016 4:38:00 PM

i like how this was done as the search for truth continues in life, anne... so lovely; happy huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/21/2016 7:51:00 AM

- Nette, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/20/2016 2:47:00 PM

A blessing for life to be truth but temptation is always there to cause havoc. Love the thoughts Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2016 3:48:00 PM

- Words of truth, dear Eve - thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2016 1:49:00 PM

I especially love the second couplet Anne Lise - a wonderful poem:-) hugs Jan xx7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2016 2:43:00 PM

- Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/20/2016 1:35:00 PM

Oh this is so good A-L...a favorite

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2016 2:41:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your comments, a pleasure you enjoy it Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)