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- Falsehood -

Is there still a rainbow after the rain?
An unanswered message, life is full of lies

Darkness falls - like a thief steals the daylight
I get confused - hear demons whisper

It happened so suddenly, struggling to breathe
Tired of all the things that hurts

If life was an adventure I would love to dance
Everything around me is in a white blur - the truth?








  20.07.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
  (unrhymed couplets)
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Nilima Deb Date: 8/12/2016 6:28:00 AM lovely write !!!..loved the flow dear. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/12/2016 7:26:00 AM - Nilima, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi Date: 8/3/2016 2:59:00 AM My dear Sunshine, dance and dance more.... There is a dragon in our path keeps treasures on loan.... Defy the dragon's wrath when love's treasures shone..... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/6/2016 12:07:00 PM - Thanks Pashang, for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Corbin Date: 7/28/2016 8:40:00 AM Loved this one! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/28/2016 8:56:00 AM - Michelle, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Street Poet Date: 7/27/2016 6:21:00 AM I wish to make it in my native language. Will u please permit ? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/27/2016 6:35:00 AM - With pleasure, but you have to post it in my name - I have the   : Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Let me know when you post it :) - hugs

Street Poet Date: 7/27/2016 6:18:00 AM Very good poem; what logic behind first 2 lines ? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/27/2016 6:38:00 AM - Who can we trust ..... many have many different faces ..... a friend? .... an enemy ? .....an uncertain world - hugs

Daniel Turner Date: 7/25/2016 8:06:00 AM Sorry I missed your POTD. Last week was pretty hectic for me. Congratulations for your write. Yes life is full of lies. How we deal with those lies determines our character. Just dance Anne Lise, it's more fun to be happy! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/25/2016 8:09:00 AM - Never too late Daniel, nice to see you when you have time :) - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Umar Kakamu Aliyu Date: 7/22/2016 5:14:00 PM congrats on your poem selection. nice poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/23/2016 6:04:00 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Umar :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei Date: 7/22/2016 4:41:00 PM Anee, Well penned. A big congrats for ur well deserving POTD. A 7 from me........//:) hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/23/2016 6:03:00 AM - Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and congratulations, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 7/22/2016 3:44:00 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A TR/FAV here on this deep and very powerful write. And Congratulations on POTD too!! Truth and Falsehood; Light and Darkness; are constant warring companions in this world we call our "mortal existence." Where is and what is the truth?? are constant questions which puzzle many and pervade the human psyche. A most excellent couplet!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 3:51:00 PM - Your comments mean a lot to me, dear Gary - I really appreciate a tr. + fav. from you - Many unanswered questions on our journey - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman Date: 7/22/2016 10:47:00 AM Darkness, a part of life. Dark emotional write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 11:04:00 AM - That is right, James - Appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan Date: 7/22/2016 9:25:00 AM Deep write... Congrats for your well deserved POTD.... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 11:03:00 AM - Thanks Supraja, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Chansarkar Date: 7/22/2016 8:43:00 AM Lovely words with a deep truth,so happy for you Sunshine,congratulations! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 9:03:00 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance Date: 7/22/2016 8:27:00 AM There is so much here in these few lines, powerful thoughts that lie in the darkness of the letters. Grats on this piece being featured as poem of the day! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 8:30:00 AM - Thanks Casarah, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 7/22/2016 8:10:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, This a deep thought provoking write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 8:13:00 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 7/22/2016 6:52:00 AM Great work, congratulations Sunshine on POTD honors... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 7:46:00 AM - Thanks Charlie, that was a pleasant surprise :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 7/21/2016 11:36:00 PM This is a fav for me, such intensity! A7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 7:53:00 AM - A pleasure, thanks for a fav. and a 7 Arthur - Always nice to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/21/2016 5:00:00 PM Very creative work..Expressive and emotive..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 7:49:00 AM - Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Misty Mccoi Date: 7/21/2016 3:19:00 PM Sunshine Smile, I like your poem. I feel what you are talking about. Good writing. Misty Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2016 7:48:00 AM - Appreciate your comments Misty, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/21/2016 5:08:00 AM A deeply philosophical couplet my dearest, Anne-Lise! Enjoyed it a lot! A seven! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2016 7:58:00 AM - Dear Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive your positive comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/21/2016 4:23:00 AM Excellent. Beautifully said. Life to be truth always. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2016 7:56:00 AM - Appreciate your comments Ravi, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 7/20/2016 6:00:00 PM i think it's a situation of great frustration caused out of heart broken. Beautifully expressed. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2016 7:54:00 AM - Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/20/2016 4:38:00 PM i like how this was done as the search for truth continues in life, anne... so lovely; happy huggs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2016 7:51:00 AM - Nette, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 7/20/2016 2:47:00 PM A blessing for life to be truth but temptation is always there to cause havoc. Love the thoughts Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2016 3:48:00 PM - Words of truth, dear Eve - thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 1:49:00 PM I especially love the second couplet Anne Lise - a wonderful poem:-) hugs Jan xx7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2016 2:43:00 PM - Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 7/20/2016 1:35:00 PM Oh this is so good A-L...a favorite Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2016 2:41:00 PM - Highly appreciate your comments, a pleasure you enjoy it Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)