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- Down the Primrose Path -

Feel gaiety ...
the energy
Rest a little ...
watch and listen
Follow the path
a cradle ...
of flowers ...
Oh my ...
Primrose Crown

The old table
with injuries
and weaknesses
invites to dinner ...
The finest porcelain
beautiful crystal glass
kissed by your lips
Oh my ...
Primrose Beads

Not alone ...
the dear buds ...
fullness to women's skin
fertility ...
harmony ...
uncovered ...
emotional experiences
Oh my ...
Primrose Jewel 








01/02 - 2020
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Pick A Title, Vol 13 - Lyric - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 
3. Down The Primrose Path
4th place in the contest

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Vijay Pandit Date: 2/12/2020 4:10:00 PM Congrats Anne Lise, on this winning poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/13/2020 1:49:00 PM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 2/11/2020 5:46:00 PM Sunshine, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/12/2020 1:36:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/5/2020 11:12:00 AM I love your perspective of walking down a Primrose path dear friend. Your imagination is fertile just as the flowers down the path. I love the awesome way you express yourself dear Soul sister, so beautiful, so dainty, so feminine. Best of luck in the contest Sunshine Smile. Hugs an blessings, Jenny. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/6/2020 12:26:00 PM - Many thanks for the supportive and lovely comment, dear friend Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 2/4/2020 6:26:00 AM A superb interpretation of the theme, such wonderful imagery anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2020 6:22:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 2/3/2020 4:25:00 AM Wow. I like that, Kai Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2020 6:21:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 2/2/2020 5:24:00 PM Anne-Lise, Lovely path you've created in this poem with a kiss. -Richard Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2020 6:21:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 2/2/2020 1:04:00 PM A lovely lyric full of imagery... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2020 1:06:00 PM - I don't know if the lyrics are right ... - I let it go ... thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/2/2020 5:22:00 AM An outstanding description of beauty in lyric form dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2020 1:08:00 PM - Lyric or not ... I'm not sure, but glad you like it - Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner Date: 2/1/2020 7:53:00 PM A-L i enjoyed reading your poem. I especially liked the second verse. That photo looks like some of the paths I wander:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2020 1:01:00 PM - Many thanks, glad you enjoyed it Daniel :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/1/2020 4:41:00 PM A beautiful lyric Anne, well written. Good luck Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2020 7:20:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 2/1/2020 4:07:00 PM this is beautiful Anne-Lise... your words bring life to that photo wonderfully... best wishes in the contest... hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2020 7:20:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)