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- Broken Inside -

I think about you all the time, I just can't let you go. I try to hide myself inside but the feelings come out and show. I know that it is over, you want nothing more from me. But I can't seem to move on, because you've broken me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:31:00 PM
Charity, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/3/2013 3:07:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Charity ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2013 10:50:00 PM
Honey,I'm so sorry. I just been through somthing like that. Hange in there ok? I love you. God bless.
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Date: 9/2/2013 10:43:00 PM
hi Charity, I know how this feel...... deep, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 9/2/2013 9:09:00 PM
Charity, deep emotions, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/2/2013 6:50:00 PM
Hi Charity, this is something that I can truly relate to. However if the person have already moved on, you should try to do so also. Sad but lovely read.
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