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pinwheel milky way freeze the upward path of night children’s choir sings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2012 3:31:00 PM
aweee... love this...pd
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Date: 3/29/2011 3:54:00 PM
Bravo for being on the Hot List of poems with this stunner Debbie.. a terrific piece of creativity luv... am working on your contest entry for Shamans so hope u will be pleasantly surprised ... good luck with this new theme ..
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:43:00 AM
Debbie, This is beautiful, well done on your win:))
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Date: 3/29/2011 9:18:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your well deserved win!Wonderful Haiku!---kashinath
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Date: 3/28/2011 6:10:00 PM
!! Congratulations on your 8th Place win, Debbie! Love the view you captured from the picture. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/28/2011 1:01:00 PM
I love that last line especially!! It is like watching a movie with a wonderful musical score!! Exactly what they would use for a scene like this!! :)
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Date: 3/28/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Rick, Debbie
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Date: 3/28/2011 12:42:00 PM
What an interesting and delightful interpretation of the photo, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/28/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with these elegant words luv... beautiful photo and beautiful words to compliment it.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:52:00 AM
many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:44:00 AM
JEEEPERS!! a fave of mine, debs... " children's choir sings.." very covert.. CONGRATS for bagging a big citation in this tourney!
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:37:00 PM
I love your take on that beautiful picture.. a sure winner in my book... ove and hugs Michael
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Date: 3/23/2011 10:11:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku you have penned for the contest. I enjoyed the read, good luck. Caryl
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:30:00 AM
Splendid piece on the photo Debbie.. luv the title .. super cool... good luck in the new contest luv..
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