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Repeating doubts Squashed between Brackets in my Head; they clog The free-flow! Freedom to let My mind wander To and fro, Like it does When I'm happy!

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/9/2010 6:10:00 PM

again creative writing here!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/4/2010 9:49:00 PM

A very good observation, David!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 7:39:00 PM

An interesting little poem, David. Nice seeing you here tonight. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/4/2010 7:16:00 AM

Insightful piece David, really enjoyed it this afternoon.. tc Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2010 4:43:00 PM

enjoyed this one,, cool write...P.D.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/3/2010 4:11:00 PM

David, I like this poem very much. I think we have all felt this way at different times, yet you were able to express it so well. Soupmail

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/3/2010 3:50:00 PM

This is really quite deep, David. I get these doubts (thoughts in parentheses that interfere with uplifting thoughts) as well. If you find a way to dispell these "brackets," please let me know. Excellent, insightful poem, my friend! I have just returned from vacation. Love, Carolyn