To A Young Lady
In vain, fair Maid, you ask in vain,
My pen should try th' advent'rous strain,
And following truth's unalter'd law,
Attempt your character to draw.
I own indeed, that generous mind
That weeps the woes of human kind,
That heart by friendship's charms inspired,
That soul with sprightly fancy fired,
The air of life, the vivid eye,
The flowing wit, the keen reply--
To paint these beauties as they shine,
Might ask a nobler pen than mine.
Yet what sure strokes can draw the Fair,
Who vary, like the fleeting air,
Like willows bending to the force,
Where'er the gales direct their course,
Opposed to no misfortune's power,
And changing with the changing hour.
Now gaily sporting on the plain,
They charm the grove with pleasing strain;
Anon disturb'd, they know not why,
The sad tear trembles in their eye:
Led through vain life's uncertain dance,
The dupes of whim, the slaves of chance.
From me, not famed for much goodnature,
Expect not compliment, but satire;
To draw your picture quite unable,
Instead of fact accept a Fable.
One morn, in Æsop's noisy time,
When all things talk'd, and talk'd in rhyme,
A cloud exhaled by vernal beams
Rose curling o'er the glassy streams.
The dawn her orient blushes spread,
And tinged its lucid skirts with red,
Wide waved its folds with glitt'ring dies,
And gaily streak'd the eastern skies;
Beneath, illumed with rising day,
The sea's broad mirror floating lay.
Pleased, o'er the wave it hung in air,
Survey'd its glittering glories there,
And fancied, dress'd in gorgeous show,
Itself the brightest thing below:
For clouds could raise the vaunting strain,
And not the fair alone were vain.
Yet well it knew, howe'er array'd,
That beauty, e'en in clouds, might fade,
That nothing sure its charms could boast
Above the loveliest earthly toast;
And so, like them, in early dawn
Resolved its picture should be drawn,
That when old age with length'ning day
Should brush the vivid rose away,
The world should from the portrait own
Beyond all clouds how bright it shone.
Hard by, a painter raised his stage,
Far famed, the Copley[1] of his age.
So just a form his colours drew,
Each eye the perfect semblance knew;
Yet still on every blooming face
He pour'd the pencil's flowing grace;
Each critic praised the artist rare,
Who drew so like, and yet so fair.
To him, high floating in the sky
Th' elated Cloud advanced t' apply.
The painter soon his colours brought,
The Cloud then sat, the artist wrought;
Survey'd her form, with flatt'ring strictures,
Just as when ladies sit for pictures,
Declared "whatever art can do,
My utmost skill shall try for you:
But sure those strong and golden dies
Dipp'd in the radiance of the skies,
Those folds of gay celestial dress,
No mortal colours can express.
Not spread triumphal o'er the plain,
The rainbow boasts so fair a train,
Nor e'en the morning sun so bright,
Who robes his face in heav'nly light.
To view that form of angel make,
Again Ixion would mistake,[2]
And justly deem so fair a prize,
The sovereign Mistress of the skies,"
He said, and drew a mazy line,
With crimson touch his pencils shine,
The mingling colours sweetly fade,
And justly temper light and shade.
He look'd; the swelling Cloud on high
With wider circuit spread the sky,
Stretch'd to the sun an ampler train,
And pour'd new glories on the main.
As quick, effacing every ground,
His pencil swept the canvas round,
And o'er its field, with magic art,
Call'd forth new forms in every part.
But now the sun, with rising ray,
Advanced with speed his early way;
Each colour takes a differing die,
The orange glows, the purples fly.
The artist views the alter'd sight,
And varies with the varying light;
In vain! a sudden gust arose,
New folds ascend, new shades disclose,
And sailing on with swifter pace,
The Cloud displays another face.
In vain the painter, vex'd at heart,
Tried all the wonders of his art;
In vain he begg'd, her form to grace,
One moment she would keep her place:
For, "changing thus with every gale,
Now gay with light, with gloom now pale,
Now high in air with gorgeous train,
Now settling on the darken'd main,
With looks more various than the moon;
A French coquette were drawn as soon."
He spoke; again the air was mild,
The Cloud with opening radiance smiled;
With canvas new his art he tries,
Anew he joins the glitt'ring dies;
Th' admiring Cloud with pride beheld
Her image deck the pictured field,
And colours half-complete adorn
The splendor of the painted morn.
When lo, the stormy winds arise,
Deep gloom invests the changing skies;
The sounding tempest shakes the plain,
And lifts in billowy surge the main.
The Cloud's gay dies in darkness fade,
Its folds condense in thicker shade,
And borne by rushing blasts, its form
With lowering vapour joins the storm.
Literary Analysis
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Summary
John Trumbull's poem begins like a graceful compliment, but it quickly turns into a playful refusal to flatter. The poet pretends that he cannot honestly "draw" the young lady's character, even while listing the very qualities that make her seem admirable: feeling, friendship, wit, and lively conversation. That opening praise is immediately complicated by a sharper claim that women, or at least the fashionable young lady being addressed, are changeable and difficult to fix in any lasting portrait.
To solve the problem, Trumbull replaces direct description with a fable about a cloud and a painter. The cloud, like the woman he has been asked to depict, is beautiful, shifting, and impossible to capture in a single stable image. The painter's effort to record it becomes a comic struggle against movement, light, and weather, until the cloud finally dissolves into storm. The poem's central meaning lies in that tension between admiration and satire: it offers genuine appreciation for feminine brilliance while also exposing the vanity, instability, and self-dramatizing habits the poet associates with beauty.
Theme
- Admiration mixed with irony - The poem does not simply praise the young lady; it praises her through a teasing refusal, making admiration and mockery work together.
- Changeability - The cloud fable presents beauty as constantly shifting, suggesting that the young lady's charm is real but difficult to hold still or define.
- Limits of representation - The painter's repeated failures show how language and art struggle to preserve something mutable in a fixed form.
- Vanity and self-display - The cloud's delight in its own brightness mirrors the poem's critique of pride and the desire to be admired.
- Appearance versus essence - The young lady is described through surfaces, flashes, and moods, leaving open the question of whether those visible traits reveal a deeper steadiness.
- Satire of social femininity - Trumbull turns the young lady into a comic type associated with fashion, mood, and caprice rather than a fully individualized portrait.
Literary Devices
- Heroic couplets - The tightly rhymed pairs of lines give the poem a polished, controlled sound that suits its witty, satirical manner.
- Extended allegory - The cloud and painter story serves as a sustained symbolic substitute for the impossible task of describing the woman directly.
- Mock compliment - The poem repeatedly sounds admiring while undercutting praise with irony, making flattery itself part of the joke.
- Personification - The cloud is treated as vain, proud, and responsive to praise, allowing it to stand in for human vanity.
- Simile - Comparisons to willow branches, the moon, and social types sharpen the sense of instability and dependence on external forces.
- Allusion - References to Aesop, Ixion, and Copley broaden the poem's comic frame and lend learned polish to the satire.
- Imagery - Vivid color, light, sky, and storm imagery make the cloud scene visually dynamic and emphasize constant transformation.
- Hyperbole - Exaggerated praise of beauty and artistic skill heightens the comic tone and exposes the inflation behind social compliment.
Symbolism
- The cloud - It symbolizes beauty, vanity, and instability, especially the kind of charm that changes with circumstance and cannot be held in place.
- The painter - He represents the artist or poet trying to preserve a fleeting subject, while also exposing the limits of flattering portraiture.
- The changing sky - The shifting light and weather mirror emotional and social unpredictability.
- The portrait - It suggests the desire for fixed identity, even when the subject resists permanence.
- The storm - The final storm can be read as the collapse of vanity into disorder, ending the illusion of controlled beauty.
Tone
Trumbull's tone is urbane, teasing, and distinctly skeptical; he sounds amused by the young lady even when he appears to praise her. The mood for the reader shifts between light comic elegance and a sharper sense of instability, because the graceful opening gives way to a fable that quietly exposes vanity, fluctuation, and the difficulty of capturing beauty in lasting words.
Historical Context
John Trumbull wrote in the world of late colonial and early national American neoclassicism, a literary culture that valued wit, balance, satirical observation, and the polished couplet. Poems like this often borrow from classical fable, Augustan satire, and the social poetry of the eighteenth century, where elegance and moral commentary frequently coexist.
The poem also reflects a period when portraiture, conversation, and social reputation were important markers of taste and rank. Its comic attention to likeness, painting, and female "character" fits a broader eighteenth-century habit of treating social life as something to be observed, classified, and gently mocked through learned allusion and controlled poetic form.