The Loom of Dreams

 I broider the world upon a loom, 
I broider with dreams my tapestry; 
Here in a little lonely room 
I am master of earth and sea, 
And the planets come to me. 

I broider my life into the frame, 
I broider my love, thread upon thread; 
The world goes by with its glory and shame, 
Crowns are bartered and blood is shed; 
I sit and broider my dreams instead. 

And the only world is the world of my dreams, 
And my weaving the only happiness; 
For what is the world but what it seems? 
And who knows but that God, beyond our guess, 
Sits weaving worlds out of loneliness?

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September 14, 2026 at 3:20 PM
Hi! I really enjoyed your poetry. The progression between your stanzas made me think about how powerful it could be to have the visuals continue alongside the poem, with every stanza leading into the next. I’m a commission artist focused on visual storytelling, and I’d love to explore creating a complete stanza-by-stanza visual continuation, so the poem gradually unfolds through connected visuals while preserving the feeling and progression of your original words. If you’d be interested in discussing the idea, I’d be happy to connect. Discord: eve_verse Email: [email protected]
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