Land Mine

 A grey gull hovered overhead,
 Then wisely flew away.
'In half a jiffy you'll be dead,'
 I thought I heard it say;
As there upon the railway line,
 Checking an urge to cough,
I laboured to de-fuse the mine
 That had not yet gone off.

I tapped around the time-clock rim,
 Then something worried me.
I heard the singing of a hymn:
 Nearer my God to Thee.
That damned Salvation Army band!
 I phoned back to the boys:
'Please tell them,--they will understand,--
 Cut out the bloody noise!'

Silence . . . I went to work anew,
 And then I heard a tick
That told me the blast was due,--
 I never ran so quick.
I heard the fury-roar behind;
 The earth erupted hell,
As hoisted high and stunned and blind
 Into a ditch I fell.

Then when at last I crawled from cover,
 My hands were bloody raw;
And I was blue and bruised all over,
 And this is what I saw:
All pale, but panting with elation,
 And very much unstuck,
There was the Army of Salvation
 Emerging from the muck.

And then I heard the Captain saying:
 ''Twas Heaven heard our pleas;
For there anight we all were praying
 Down on our bended knees.
'Twas little hope your comrades gave you,
 Though we had faith divine . . .
The blessed Lord stooped down to save you,
 But Gosh! He cut it fine.'

Form: Narrative Comments

Comments About This Poem

Share your interpretation, favorite passage, or thoughts about this famous poem. Please provide an in-depth and meaningful comment.

  • What do you think the poet was trying to say?
  • Which line had the biggest impact on you?
  • How does this poem relate to modern life?
  • What literary devices did you notice?
No comments have been posted yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace