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Snowflakes Melting Before the Diadem


"Snowflakes Melting before the Diadem"

Winter is coming
and what then?
the dreams frozen 
snowflakes falling
we succomb 
tongues out waiting 
for manna, 
pills swallowed
for the diadem
needles of pine
instead of thorns
bedded,

the sweet sleep 
is coming, 
slowly it cajoles
swiftly it comes

the folded corners
sheets tucked in
the safety barrs 
raised, just so,
the corridors
their watching 
starched stations
14 in all,
busy with purpose
soft shoe assassins
monitoring our nights, 
our energy pulses, 
just like veiled brides
more like blue nuns

we sing the
song of souls
like a poet overcome
like a poet finding
new love 
bare feet we rise
from our shells
to speak to our
strange astral God
we are now 
zephyr 
contained as one

some of us
take our time
falling 

we are 
snowflakes
melting in the Sun

melting 
on the lips and 
brows of others
we are ghosts 
holy and unholy 
felt and spoken 
some of us 
take our time 
falling 

we sink 
into the lips,
and tongues, 
the brows 
and skin of others

we are 
snowflakes
melting 

in the Sun


(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)
via lucis




“It is a song composed by contemplation,
And published by silence,
And shunned by clamor,
And folded by truth,
And repeated by dreams,
And understood by love,
And hidden by awakening,
And sung by the soul.

It is the song of love;
What Cain or Esau could sing it?”











pine. noun.
pine. verb.
stations.

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Date: 8/28/2023 3:57:00 AM
We sing the songs, like poets finding new love! Ah those lines really pulled my heartstrings, so gorgeous and evocative the way you’ve written this is seamless and so creative. Imagery is stunning and so very moving: you truly have a way with words and making them flow meticulously. Narrative at its finest. And depth of this is profound.love this
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/28/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/27/2023 12:19:00 PM
My good friend, I read it 3 times to be ablet enjoy and absorb it all. Yet again your verses sing and dance on the page. A great poem, one a golden pen erupted onto the page to gift to its readers! Again and yes, another fine fav. God bless you.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/28/2023 6:18:00 PM
lol...I don't think I have a pen big enough.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/28/2023 9:33:00 AM
Elephant ass, hmmmmm... Damn good subject for a poem it is my friend. I am absolutely sure that with the high level of your poetic brain you can write that poem using the word erupted! And it will be truly awesomely golden. Please notify me if you do. Khalil was a truly great poet, I read and studied his poems long ago. God bless you my good friend.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/27/2023 4:48:00 PM
That word "erupted" reminds me of a poem I just read about an elephant's ass (here in the esteemed pages of the Consommé), which truly made my day, so funny, it made me smile from ear to ear. If only I was so clever. Inspiration is scooped from the oddest quarters. :) On another note, I may have to write a poem using the word "erupted"...that might take some time requiring large spoonfuls of bran. How could I, after that thought, mention how eloquent Khalil Gibran's thoughts were in the poems he wrote, which I've included below - that man was channelling someone divine, another poet, I am sure of that; he puts all into earnest and humble perspective. Thank you Lindley. :)
Date: 8/27/2023 1:59:00 AM
Woah, this write is truly breathtaking! I'm in awe of your meticulously carved wordplay that reflects myriad depth along with such a gorgeous flow.. I love so many lines here especially "we are snowflakes melting in the sun" So profound! "We are ghosts.. Felt and spoken" Absolutely a phenomenal write, I love your writing style, truly captivates my attention!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/28/2023 9:36:00 AM
Hiya my friend she is a true and very talented poetess. I have read a great many of her poems and all of them hit this very high level. God bless you.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/27/2023 4:41:00 PM
Your writing is exquisite, another language entirely. You have an uber unique way of translating your thoughts into colour. To me your writing is a mystery and worth exploring the many diverse translation/s. I do love it very much. I got to thinking about “pine needles” after planting a poem by William Carlos Williams, titled, “Sonnet in Search of an Author”, in one of the responses to my "Something More" poem's comment boxes, and then after that reading one of your poems, which planted “pine needles” into your poem; this then led me to the variation on the word “pine” and further, equating needles in a different, but very real setting. Gibran’s poems were enlightening. I hope you enjoyed the George Sterling poem, reminded me somewhat of your style, though, he had a kaleidoscope of styles. Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 8/26/2023 1:47:00 PM
As always nice pictures. I love the blue snowflake. Would love to have it to wear. Oh yes, winter will be here before we know it. The bears will be in their sweet deep sleep for a few months. Love your ending "we are snowflakes melting in the Sun." We are... Have a great day writing away.........................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/26/2023 2:42:00 PM
As always, the visual embedded (and the music), to work in tandem with the "words". In the poem I have written and in the poems that influenced / inspired my write (the two Khalil Gibran poems below). The interpretation is up to the reader. Thank you for your kind and astute observation.
Date: 8/25/2023 10:06:00 PM
“The Poet” by Khalil Gibran
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/25/2023 10:07:00 PM
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-11011
Date: 8/25/2023 10:06:00 PM
“Song of the Soul” by Khalil Gibran https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-10997
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/26/2023 4:09:00 PM
"Self Knowledge XVII" by Khalil Gibran https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-11030
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/26/2023 4:08:00 PM
"The Seven Selves" by Khalil Gibran https://allpoetry.com/Chapter-9---The-Seven-Selves
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/26/2023 3:54:00 PM
"On Death" by Khalil Gibran https://allpoetry.com/poem/8511781-On-Death-by-Khalil-Gibran
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/25/2023 10:07:00 PM
"Giving" by Khalil Gibran https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-11042
Date: 8/25/2023 10:06:00 PM
“Is every snowflake actually unique?” - Huffington Post
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/25/2023 10:06:00 PM
https://science.howstuffworks.com/nature/climate-weather/atmospheric/is-every-snowflake-actually-unique.htm
Date: 8/25/2023 10:05:00 PM
Primary Music embedded in poem/ Lost Unicorns - Satie: Gnossienne No.1 (Lost Unicorns Remix )
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/25/2023 10:05:00 PM
https://youtu.be/6a3fryY8-Xc?si=78ODTj0Zx_WnLKC1
Date: 8/25/2023 10:05:00 PM
Erik Satie - Gnossienne No.1 (Extended) – Classic original
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/25/2023 10:05:00 PM
https://youtu.be/F1dTv_WsMRI?si=rMiVUwze6EhVbHbF

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