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Today I found myself walking on a path through the wood
All the while I had been thinking, unaware of where I trod
Idle musing, rumination stole a  long stretch of ‘real’ time
(Despite my justification - ‘I was making up a rhyme!’)
On awaking from my absence in day-time somnambulation
I perceived a brighter world as I resumed self navigation

Some days I find myself moving on the path through my life
Wake in wonder that I got here through confusions that were rife
Via myriad of turning points that marked the final track
Made each instant unpredictable, capricious, looking back
There were times when choice was made by  random forces in collision
But between, there were those rare moments of wide awake decision

Today I found myself dreaming of a path with purpose known
Such dreams are not of sleep but of a wakefulness full blown
Thus the real and the imagined coexist and integrate
Let there also be uncertainty, the spice to stimulate
While stress tempts anaesthetising mind diversions from the shelf
Let me wake from unawareness and perhaps may find myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/16/2020 1:50:00 AM
This brought Walden's Pond to my mind immediately. I doubt Thoreau would have written anything half this great. Well done! Congrats on your win.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/16/2020 4:20:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words, Caren.
Date: 9/29/2020 12:27:00 PM
Great Job! Congrats on your top win!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/1/2020 8:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mark.
Date: 9/27/2020 10:19:00 AM
wow, this is so intriguing, Geoffrey. It was mystical mixed with reality and very eloquently described.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/13/2020 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your detailed and kind response, Andrea.
Date: 9/25/2020 10:24:00 AM
Clever work Geoffrey - Congratulations! This is the first poem I've read that has had me thinking about the Default Mode Network in the brain. :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/26/2020 1:47:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. I confess that I was not, until your prompt, aware of the Default Mode Network. I have now checked it out. I tend to see the brain as having more a mind to body connection function than a cause. Thanks for the education.

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