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November Elegy

NOVEMBER ELEGY

The trees stand calm and tranquil in repose
Rehearsing now the waiting that’s ahead
‘til breaths of air  unloose their amber clothes
To drift in swirling fall to woodland bed
They rage not, but embrace the pass of light
As they go gentle into that good night

An air of waiting holds the spirit still
No urgency to make the final shedding
Though next life-phase is sanctioned with a will
As tawny blanket spreads new forest bedding
They’ll rage not at the passing of the light
As gently they go into that good night

As winter sleep brings time to rest and heal
Perchance to dream of sunlit summer days
When clothed in deepest green they saw the field
Of life prolific lived in all its ways 
No thought of darkness, relishing the light
Long days of wakeful life, no fear of night

Perhaps the trees teach lessons to remember
Of life repeating cycles brief and long
Our seasons’ move to end - our dark December
That shall precede Spring rebirth new and strong
Why rage against the dying of the light
Time to sleep and dream in that good gentle night

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Date: 11/20/2020 10:37:00 AM
Superb. I love your poetry Geoffrey. "Do not go gentle into That Good Night"
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Date: 11/15/2020 5:19:00 PM
This is a delightful poem in the classical style I so love and admire, Geoffrey. All the specifics have already been touched on by L.J. Carber below. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 11/15/2020 10:26:00 AM
Lovely, lovely poem, Geoff, with a nice twist on D.T.'s little gem [and a bit of the Bard thrown in?--i.e. 'perchance to dream...'] AND you appear to throw in a bit of re-incarnation at the end, no? This is one of those rare poems that will grow every time it's re-read.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/15/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for your perceptive and thoughtful response, Len. Yes, indeed I do imply a new life following an ending of the old one. How this might happen and in what form is open, but the key point is that we are not mere physical forms that appear once and are then erased.

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