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Maybe I am pessimistic
you might say I'm not realistic

Finally my true love appeared
after waiting all these years...
it did happen
right before my eyes
yes, he was a prince in disguise

True loves
always arrive on time...
looking to be in their prime 
evident in all the rhymes

Seems my Prince Dixon
took up with Lady Vixon
on his way to me
right or not he needs fixin'
you certainly must agree

June 20, 2018


Fairy Tale Contest by Alexis Y.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/2/2020 10:49:00 AM
Cute and clever Susan
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Date: 10/13/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your fairytale win, Susan. :)
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Date: 6/23/2018 11:20:00 AM
Acrostics sure are rewlly difficult to write but you have done a wonderful job in writing this poem, I see that it s for a contest, so I wish you best of luck in it
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 6/22/2018 7:05:00 AM
Nicely written, Susan, I enjoyed reading this. John
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 2:16:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Date: 6/21/2018 5:47:00 PM
Well-done, Susan! Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/20/2018 6:24:00 PM
oh my, no happily ever after. This is a fun and unique poem!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 12:27:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 6/20/2018 4:02:00 PM
You must give Lady Vixon her due! Smiled while reading this charming poem :) Best wishes in the contest, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 12:26:00 AM
Thanks! :)
Date: 6/20/2018 1:56:00 PM
Loved your acrostic Susan..
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 12:26:00 AM
Thank you!

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