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The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until Spring 
Money was needed for refurbishing
Built in nineteen hundred and seventeen
It was advised they replace everything 

A treasured part of local history
Host to all the town's social memories
The wheel itself was pieced in artistry
Workers heard tales of hidden treasury

Whispers ran through the town from door to door
The Mill required complete overhaul and more
The expenses were beginning to soar
They scoffed at hidden treasure folklore

A deep freeze stopped all construction for weeks
Influx of needed money appeared bleak
The refurbished wheel was installed - now leaks
Ice melts, revealing secrets - wheel creaks 

A puzzled technician on wheel repair
Opens up a toolbox, gasps, stops to stare
The bricks of gold have answered their prayers
The Mill has been replicated with care!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/5/2018 1:39:00 AM
oh if only it was true Susan, we have a water wheel in Groudle glen and it is in need of refurbishment... if you find any more gold bars let me know !:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2018 2:19:00 PM
Such a lovely tale, with such a perfect fairy tale twist to it. Nice entry for the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/4/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thanks, tried anyway. :)
Date: 7/4/2018 10:55:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Susan, you should do well...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/4/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/4/2018 1:57:00 AM
Love it Susan, err where exactly did you say it was ? Lol. Good luck. Tom
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/4/2018 2:47:00 AM
Lol... I might should add fiction somewhere. Thanks, Tom.

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