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Circling Dew

dew
                                              sparkling
                                              on petals
                                               invisible
                                         soul vapor rising
                                          gaily bouncing
                                              in the air
                                               returns
                                                 dew



First Place Winner: Caren Krutsinger: Ninette Contest 7/25/21

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2021 4:50:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win Frances:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/23/2021 12:38:00 PM

Frances, congrats on your 1st place win with this delightful ninette! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2021 3:50:00 PM

like circle of life, the circle of dew. COOL one, and congrats.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/21/2021 10:20:00 AM

What a lovely picture Frances! There is something enchanting about dewdrops and you have captured that enchantment in your Ninette! Congratulations on your first place win!