Castles

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Written, May 13, 2025
For The Contest, “Micro Poem"
Sponsor, Ink Empress

Children- so carefree

     laugh when castles

          topple in the sea ~

               May future dreams

                    survive maturity

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:37:00 AM

oh, this was so adorable. Love it!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 3:29:00 AM

Cute picture to go with your well written take on the prompt! Love the flow and imagery..Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2025 4:25:00 PM

Seems they accept the temporary without fear of the unknown.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/13/2025 3:17:00 PM

What a fun write and picture. I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful day writing away...........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/13/2025 10:39:00 AM

Oh, how I wanna kiss on the precious baby in that picture, it has been so long since I've even smelled a baby. Your talent has always impressed me and that your talent never flounders during your winter years is not only a blessing for you, but me and others, too. I hope I am still poetry clear as I near the bridge to 70 with traumatic brain injury induced dementia. To know that I know I do not know gives me the wisdom to give that fear to God. Good to see / read you. CayCay