Why Is Child Heartbroken

"The pen must go where the pen wants to go. Today it went down Heartbroken Lane." By Poet
The day came in with a great start but is going out with a broken part. With a child's loving and young heart, it must take a very painful dart. today I lost my furry best friend, in life guess some things have to end. Her soft cream and tan colored fur, would make me really want to purr. The day we got her from the pound, was all smiles and never a frown. My little heart filled with smiles and love, I knew she was from heaven above. A saved rescue pet she would be, wearing a halo for all to see. Mommy made car riding so real, it was always a big fun deal. Night time we would drift off to sleep, morning from the bed we would leap. For a child death is always so cold, our good times I will forever behold. Now Angel is gone to heaven to wait, rainbow bridge crossing has no date.
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Date: 8/1/2025 7:56:00 AM
Paula, ccongratulations on your win in my Heartbroken contest, I love your quote, and your words are wonderfully penned , blessings ~
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2025 1:46:00 PM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you love my quote. I enjoyed writing this one for you contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/22/2025 9:34:00 AM
A grand elegy beautifully written in the form of a powerful rhyme. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2025 12:07:00 PM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations and kind words. Always great to see you here. A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/22/2025 8:01:00 AM
"2 Place" Why Is Child Heartbroken??? ~ Date Written:7/18/2025 ~ Written by Human Poet ~
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Date: 7/22/2025 2:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2025 8:07:00 AM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write again. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Always great to see you here. Hugs... A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/21/2025 12:29:00 PM
Lovely, sweet, moving poem, Paula! Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2025 8:04:00 AM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write. Glad you found this write to be a, Lovely, sweet, moving poem. I enjoyed writing this one. A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/19/2025 1:35:00 PM
Today it went down heartbroken lane…aww, bye kitty! So sorry…
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2025 9:36:00 AM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write. Glad you enjoyed it. It was about a young child and the death of her loved pet. This was when I was a young child. I have been off the computer for a few days. A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/19/2025 11:40:00 AM
- A lovely ... but sad poem ... heartbreaking - Best wishes in the contest, Paula :) - (I think this is my first contest that Constance sponsors that I haven't written for... I've been on summer vacation and haven't had time for soup) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2025 12:03:00 PM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed it. It was about a young child and the death of her loved pet. I have been off the computer for a few days. Hugs... A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/18/2025 5:03:00 PM
you're right, Paula...the pen goes where it wants to go..thanks for letting yours express your sadness in such beautiful words. Sending hugs, Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2025 11:45:00 AM
Thank You for reading my sad "Why Is Child Heartbroken???" write. Glad you enjoyed it and found this to have beautiful words. I have been off the computer for a few days. A true writer will let their pen go where the pen wants to go. Now Write On........
Date: 7/18/2025 10:24:00 AM
Why Is Child Heartbroken??? ~ Date Written:7/18/2025 ~ Written by Human Poet ~
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