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Warm Island

Bird on warm island.
It is time to migrate north.
Bird thinks, "Why bother?:

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2025 11:06:00 AM

Sometimes you’re right where you want to be!

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/21/2025 1:34:00 PM

That's true.

Robert Schatz

Date: 2/20/2024 4:57:00 PM

Got to love a funny haiku. I didn't see it coming...

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/30/2024 4:02:00 PM

Thank you for reading it. The bird isn't a follower.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 8:51:00 AM

Oh how cute, such a lovely haiku this is, dear Hilda.. You've beautifully painted a scene where birds too ponder and hesitate in leaving their warm place, why bother haha.. I can connect to this as it speaks about the feelings of an introvert too.. Loved reading this.. Sending many best wishes & light to you :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/21/2024 9:59:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/17/2024 12:43:00 PM

A fun poem, that fits my mood exactly, sometimes. So nicely written, Hilda. :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/17/2024 1:08:00 PM

It gives me joy that it brought you joy. Thank you.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 5:50:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Hilda. Some birds are smarter than others ... kind of like humans. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:51:00 PM

Thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/15/2024 4:49:00 PM

The surprise ending was my favorite part of this Haiku. Great job, Hilda! Was a pleasure to read

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:03:00 PM

Thank you for your visit.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/15/2024 12:36:00 PM

Good one. I liked the idea if a bord thinking. That made me laugh, Merci, Pangie

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 12:54:00 PM

Thanks for laughing. I was thinking that s bird might think that he goes north, then south, then north again, and so why not cut the fat, sorta speak.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/15/2024 3:17:00 AM

Sometimes even birds get comfortable being in their comfort zone, just like us. I feel this way alot as an introvert. Hah. Very well written dear hilda. Words to ponder upon

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:31:00 AM

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading it.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/15/2024 1:20:00 AM

At the moment, I prefer warmth.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:29:00 AM

I guess it's 'birds of a feather' for you. Stay warm.

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/14/2024 11:56:00 PM

I got a real kick out this one Hilda. :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:28:00 AM

I guess it is funny. Thank you for reading it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2024 6:36:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha. Smart bird, I say.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 8:52:00 PM

Yes. Smart or old or tired.

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/14/2024 1:40:00 PM

Hi Hilda, Many thanks for visiting my page and your comment on Poetic Tyburn Set. Much appreciated. You have written an excellent Haiku with a clever twist. Howard

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 2:19:00 PM

Thank you.