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Trace My Mood

These mismatched and misplaced moments make sense 
                                                         – especially now
             while distance draws a breath,
        making the picture completely cloudy,
                              
                              I somehow allow
                     droplets on the window to trace my mood
                         
                                  - -  especially now - -



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Paige Hind Date: 10/21/2024 5:39:00 PM Very breathtaking, <3 Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2024 11:58:00 AM You're so kind. Thank you, Paige. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Rob Levasseur Date: 12/28/2020 10:50:00 AM The second stanza is sublime. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2024 11:46:00 AM Thank you, Rob. I'm just now seeing your comment. I hope all is well with you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt Date: 12/31/2019 12:44:00 AM I always enjoy how you frame your poems, with indents and spaces, and your repeats and use of bold for emphasis. I liked the alliteration at the beginning. Mostly I appreciate that you write from the heart and capture a moment and emotion in words. Blessings ~ John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/31/2019 2:26:00 PM Thank you John, such a wonderful thing to say- about me and my poetry. Yes, always writing from the depth of my heart. Placing certain words or phrases in bold, helps create the mood. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many blessings to you, in the New Year. ~ Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 12/7/2019 7:21:00 AM Oh how I do so love your scribbles. You're an awesome scribbler. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/7/2019 7:23:00 PM So sweet of you to say. Thank you Robert. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/20/2019 11:51:00 PM There is something sensual about some melancholy moments. The ache gives the moment texture. I enjoyed your poem. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/21/2019 7:19:00 PM You are right, sometimes tender moments hold a passionate touch. Thank you Richard, for your lovely comment. Hugs, Brandy

Ann Foster Date: 11/11/2019 4:34:00 PM Lovely. Ann Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/11/2019 6:47:00 PM Thank you Ann. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Joseph May Date: 11/9/2019 6:51:00 AM I love the third line Brandy..Very nicely rendered Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/9/2019 7:57:00 PM "while distance draws a breath" I like that thought too. It says so much. Thank you Joseph. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/8/2019 9:10:00 PM saying so much with so few words. Love that. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/8/2019 11:02:00 PM Thank you Andrea. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill Date: 11/8/2019 1:41:00 PM Good afternoon ma'am, hope all is well. I've enjoyed reading your newest works. I love watching droplets on windows, each has their own speed and line of travel, and can make one drift away in thought. This made me think of my own mood today, so I thought what it would be like to trace mine. It ended up looking like something on an etch a sketch, choppy, jagged and all screwed up :) Have a lovely weekend...TAH Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/8/2019 8:46:00 PM Still, you are the only one here that calls me ma'am. Thank you for that. It means so much. Your comment made me smile and my thoughts linger, all at the same time. I am sure you wouldn't look like a scribbled up mess. On an etch a sketch. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Thank you Tobey. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior Date: 11/8/2019 11:37:00 AM Hey...wanna trace the bark on trees? lol...lovely tracey scribbles Brandy...sending tracing paper or mist...poetic hugs...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/8/2019 7:24:00 PM I don't think I will trace tree bark. There's a poem in there somewhere, I am sure. (Soft Giggle). Thank you my Warrior with Wings. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/5/2019 6:37:00 AM Beautiful! Love how we rework our moments. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/5/2019 12:00:00 PM Thank you Kim. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/4/2019 2:35:00 PM Your little scribbles become amazing writes - minds become cluttered sometimes and writing your thoughts down helps! Well penned my friend. Hugs, Jenny. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/4/2019 8:47:00 PM Thank you Jennifer. Placing thoughts upon the page, moments and emotions are what poets do. Thank you for your lovely comment. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Silent One Date: 11/4/2019 1:57:00 PM I can trace your moood and i feel you.... i hope the mist clears and opens your mind.... nice one Brandy... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/4/2019 8:44:00 PM The mood is set to deep longing, heart aching moments and tender sadness. Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 11/4/2019 1:34:00 PM The droplets roll down the window pane like tears down her cheek from the pain in her heart... So tender and beautiful, Brandy, with a touch of longing and sadness. All the best my dear friend. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/4/2019 7:41:00 PM Tracing the mood, you certainly have. There is longing within, some sadness and pain. The heart is fragile, and should be handled with care. Always. Thank you John. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Ann Foster Date: 11/4/2019 8:09:00 AM Lovely. I am unclear if you can stop the drops... as they sometimes get out of control. Excellent write. Ann Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/4/2019 7:38:00 PM Dear Ann, the heart will always feel this emotion, that tender ache. It does get better in time. Even though it likes to return. The longing within. Thank you for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/4/2019 6:45:00 AM Misplaced moments can be quite intriguing, Brandy...until sun shines through those windows on life. You made me pause and think. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/4/2019 7:33:00 PM Your thoughts hold so much truth, as the sun will shine again. Thank you Vijay, for saying my words cause you to pause and then reflect. Such a nice thing to say, about my poetry. ~ Brandy