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Trace My Mood

These mismatched and misplaced moments make sense 
                                                         – especially now
             while distance draws a breath,
        making the picture completely cloudy,
                              
                              I somehow allow
                     droplets on the window to trace my mood
                         
                                  - -  especially now - -



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Paige Hind October 21, 2024 at 5:39 PM Very breathtaking, <3 Brandy Nicole October 22, 2024 at 11:58 AM You're so kind. Thank you, Paige. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Rob Levasseur December 28, 2020 at 10:50 AM The second stanza is sublime. Brandy Nicole October 22, 2024 at 11:46 AM Thank you, Rob. I'm just now seeing your comment. I hope all is well with you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt December 31, 2019 at 12:44 AM I always enjoy how you frame your poems, with indents and spaces, and your repeats and use of bold for emphasis. I liked the alliteration at the beginning. Mostly I appreciate that you write from the heart and capture a moment and emotion in words. Blessings ~ John Brandy Nicole December 31, 2019 at 2:26 PM Thank you John, such a wonderful thing to say- about me and my poetry. Yes, always writing from the depth of my heart. Placing certain words or phrases in bold, helps create the mood. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many blessings to you, in the New Year. ~ Brandy

Running Wolves December 7, 2019 at 7:21 AM Oh how I do so love your scribbles. You're an awesome scribbler. Brandy Nicole December 7, 2019 at 7:23 PM So sweet of you to say. Thank you Robert. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux November 20, 2019 at 11:51 PM There is something sensual about some melancholy moments. The ache gives the moment texture. I enjoyed your poem. Hugs Rick. Brandy Nicole November 21, 2019 at 7:19 PM You are right, sometimes tender moments hold a passionate touch. Thank you Richard, for your lovely comment. Hugs, Brandy

Ann Foster November 11, 2019 at 4:34 PM Lovely. Ann Brandy Nicole November 11, 2019 at 6:47 PM Thank you Ann. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Joseph May November 9, 2019 at 6:51 AM I love the third line Brandy..Very nicely rendered Brandy Nicole November 9, 2019 at 7:57 PM "while distance draws a breath" I like that thought too. It says so much. Thank you Joseph. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2019 at 9:10 PM saying so much with so few words. Love that. Brandy Nicole November 8, 2019 at 11:02 PM Thank you Andrea. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill November 8, 2019 at 1:41 PM Good afternoon ma'am, hope all is well. I've enjoyed reading your newest works. I love watching droplets on windows, each has their own speed and line of travel, and can make one drift away in thought. This made me think of my own mood today, so I thought what it would be like to trace mine. It ended up looking like something on an etch a sketch, choppy, jagged and all screwed up :) Have a lovely weekend...TAH Brandy Nicole November 8, 2019 at 8:46 PM Still, you are the only one here that calls me ma'am. Thank you for that. It means so much. Your comment made me smile and my thoughts linger, all at the same time. I am sure you wouldn't look like a scribbled up mess. On an etch a sketch. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Thank you Tobey. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior November 8, 2019 at 11:37 AM Hey...wanna trace the bark on trees? lol...lovely tracey scribbles Brandy...sending tracing paper or mist...poetic hugs...^WW^ :o) Brandy Nicole November 8, 2019 at 7:24 PM I don't think I will trace tree bark. There's a poem in there somewhere, I am sure. (Soft Giggle). Thank you my Warrior with Wings. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2019 at 6:37 AM Beautiful! Love how we rework our moments. Brandy Nicole November 5, 2019 at 12:00 PM Thank you Kim. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos November 4, 2019 at 2:35 PM Your little scribbles become amazing writes - minds become cluttered sometimes and writing your thoughts down helps! Well penned my friend. Hugs, Jenny. Brandy Nicole November 4, 2019 at 8:47 PM Thank you Jennifer. Placing thoughts upon the page, moments and emotions are what poets do. Thank you for your lovely comment. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Silent One November 4, 2019 at 1:57 PM I can trace your moood and i feel you.... i hope the mist clears and opens your mind.... nice one Brandy... Brandy Nicole November 4, 2019 at 8:44 PM The mood is set to deep longing, heart aching moments and tender sadness. Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf November 4, 2019 at 1:34 PM The droplets roll down the window pane like tears down her cheek from the pain in her heart... So tender and beautiful, Brandy, with a touch of longing and sadness. All the best my dear friend. Hugs, John Brandy Nicole November 4, 2019 at 7:41 PM Tracing the mood, you certainly have. There is longing within, some sadness and pain. The heart is fragile, and should be handled with care. Always. Thank you John. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Ann Foster November 4, 2019 at 8:09 AM Lovely. I am unclear if you can stop the drops... as they sometimes get out of control. Excellent write. Ann Brandy Nicole November 4, 2019 at 7:38 PM Dear Ann, the heart will always feel this emotion, that tender ache. It does get better in time. Even though it likes to return. The longing within. Thank you for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit November 4, 2019 at 6:45 AM Misplaced moments can be quite intriguing, Brandy...until sun shines through those windows on life. You made me pause and think. Brandy Nicole November 4, 2019 at 7:33 PM Your thoughts hold so much truth, as the sun will shine again. Thank you Vijay, for saying my words cause you to pause and then reflect. Such a nice thing to say, about my poetry. ~ Brandy