Torn


Body torn from abuse

Heart torn from sorrow

Life torn ….turned upside down

Torn is her tomorrow

abusehurtpainrhyme

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Terrell Martin

Date: 1/9/2025 2:48:00 PM

Seriously so sad...I find it beguiling that this poem manages to rip my heart out with so few lines. Kudos again dear friend.

Deb M
Date: 1/9/2025 3:02:00 PM

Thanks Terrell ....Debx

Ken Rone

Date: 1/7/2025 5:25:00 PM

Deb: I sing NO, I shout NO, I cry NO, I pray NO. Wonderful platform...a POTD best -Ken

Deb M
Date: 1/8/2025 9:37:00 AM

Hi Ken....love your comment! thankyou....Debx

Dean Wood

Date: 1/6/2025 10:51:00 AM

Makes me want to give her a hug. Evocative piece Deb!

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 11:24:00 AM

Aww thats very sweet Dean! Thanks for such a lovely comment! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/6/2025 10:09:00 AM

My sad poems are yet to come. Your poem encompasses a lot of sadness.

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 11:28:00 AM

Hi Victor….yes it does…..thanks and cuddles Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/5/2025 1:57:00 PM

Sadly for some they can't find a way out Deb., if only they'd ask for help. Tom

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 12:16:00 PM

I agree Tom its not straightforward is it! Thanks my dearest hehe!! Debx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/5/2025 12:38:00 PM

this is achingly sad, deb...

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 11:27:00 AM

Hey Ilene….Unfortunately and sadly true life for many! Thanks my friend. Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2025 12:23:00 PM

- A profound sadness, Deb - hugs

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 11:26:00 AM

Thanks Sunshine…l appreciate your comments always! Debx

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