This Thing Called Love

This thing called love, oh, tell me what it means!
Is it what breathes and lives in gilded dreams?
Is it the searing burn of hungry kiss?
Or languid afterglow of passion’s bliss?

This thing called love, is it like stormy sea?
A pounding of confines, till it runs free?
Is love a need that one must satiate?
A craving to indulge, to subjugate?

Define this love, now tell me, what you know!
Is it a tiny seed that time will grow?
Is love serene and tranquil like a prayer?
Perhaps a savage warrior on a dare?

This thing called love you think you can define
You pick your words and string them line by line
To fit your world, your needs, your safety net
but what you give to it, that’s what you’ll get

I know of love; I’ll let you have a look
It’s all of these, yet undefined by book
The essence of a life, it’s a desire
to be engulfed by love’s consuming fire

It is to me obsession’s jealous flame
Baptized by fire, your life is not the same
it is to live or die for whom you love
To burn in hell for love or soar above

Eileen Manassian
December 13, 2018
12:25 am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/9/2024 8:32:00 PM
Love this- it's so simple to understand and beautiful
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:00:00 PM
Exactly what I expect from soupers but it is getting rare that I get it. You know what I mean. I can tell when the muse is working. I like a few big words but simplisity keeps me awake.
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Date: 1/22/2019 10:54:00 AM
Hello, Eileen. I love your wonderful poetry. I'm near publication of a book of my own poetry titled: Birth to Death, and points in between: A book of poems, perceptions, reflections and inspiration. Three of my poems are on poetry soup. I will include 4 or 5 poems of other people. I'd like to use one of yours that reveals the difference between the tepid the passionate. Would you mind sending your email to me at mel.gill@synergyassociates.ca? Mel Gill
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Date: 1/21/2019 11:25:00 AM
Long time no see, I hope you are well. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/17/2019 6:48:00 PM
Super fantastic lines! :) You are a great writer and poet. Love reading your masterpieces. -JWE
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Date: 1/10/2019 11:50:00 AM
No one is sensible when it comes to love. The only thing to do is love more.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2019 8:06:00 PM
Great response!
Date: 12/30/2018 2:12:00 AM
It is all these things and more. It is its undefinable qualities that defy its description. That is why us poets never get bored with pursuing these magical experiences. This is as good as any description I have read. Hppy New YeR Eileen. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/25/2018 6:51:00 AM
You have such a way with words my friend...lovely write Eileen...we want more please lol...have a wonderful holiday season and a Merry Christmas...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 12/22/2018 6:41:00 AM
I pray the refined flames of love find you well today dear Eileen. Hugs xo
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Date: 12/14/2018 1:25:00 PM
This is beautiful, Eileen; you talk of love with meaningful and heartfelt words. Oh yes, you know of love...and the highs and lows that accompany it! The final two lines are striking and powerful. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/14/2018 1:10:00 AM
“If you find me not within you, you will never find me. For I have been with you, from the beginning of me.” Rumi... Merry Christmas to you Eileen and your beautiful Shereen.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/15/2018 6:12:00 PM
Be blessed...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/14/2018 1:18:00 AM
Mamnounam baraeh en kalame zeba. :) Thank you, dear Persian poet for quoting another Persian poet. May your days be blessed.
Date: 12/13/2018 5:07:00 PM
i agree with the WOW, eileen! i haven't seen one of your poems here in a while and i've missed reading them. this one is amazing!
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Date: 12/13/2018 5:03:00 PM
Wow. Well written Eileen :)
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