The Raid

The bloodshot moon merged into the dark, hazy night.
People wandered aimlessly, avoiding a fight.
A sultry bar still open, dispensing hard stuff.
Bootleggers were abundant till the game got rough.

A man sat in a corner observing the scene,
The boozers drank too much like goblins dark of mien.
The quiet man went to a phone booth and whispered,
The platoon was ready, their commands were answered.

A large police squad arrested the offenders,
All were fined, and none offered any false contenders.
Did they learn their lesson and mend their wicked ways?
Go to nearby villages and consider their days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/19/2025 10:19:00 AM
A common scene all over the world now a days.
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Date: 9/19/2025 9:29:00 AM
I doubt those drinkers would have learnt their lesson, their happiness is a bar at the end of the day… Beryl
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Date: 9/19/2025 1:46:00 AM
- "Did they learn their lesson and mend their wicked ways?" ... no, they continued elsewhere ... - Great writing, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/18/2025 11:20:00 PM
Cool write,
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