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The Paradiddle of Being — Book Two:
The Becoming

Daniel Henry Rodgers

 

"What we call disorder might only be an unfamiliar time signature.
Grace does not erase the rhythm of grief—it composes
around it for there comes a time when survival itself
must learn to dance. The hands remember what the heart
cannot say where pain becomes pattern,
and pattern becomes prayer."
 

- Poet

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The Paradiddle of Being - Book Two: The Becoming

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VI. We are all metric modulations of our former selves—changing time signatures mid-measure, learning to count in odd meters when life refuses to conform to 4/4 expectations finding beauty in 7/8 existence— the off-kilter cadence of becoming. The teenager tattoos pain across her skin in sixteenth-note flurries— razor crescendos marking flesh rimshots echoing in a locked room her body a snare absorbing what no one will hear. But the counselor reorients her strikes— guides her hands to ghost notes tapped on the edge of possibility showing how silence can carry rhythm how grief, redirected, becomes texture— not erased but transformed into syncopation. Teaching her flamacue and ratamacue— rudiments to rebuild rhythm from fracture. In meditation halls, the brush technique of breath against awareness sweeps circular patterns across the snare drum of consciousness each revolution revealing the interdependence of all sounds— how silence gives meaning to music how emptiness gives shape to form. Even after forgetting— we are the drum that cannot be silenced. VII. The mother with Alzheimer's forgets words but remembers the shuffle rhythm of her grandmother's feet on kitchen linoleum forty years ago— proving knowledge lives deeper than language, that love is stored in the muscle memory of tempo, in the bone-deep knowing of when to accent when to rest. The war veteran's PTSD manifests as explosive snare hits in quiet moments— his nervous system stuck in double-time every car backfire a timpani roll announcing danger that exists now only in the echo chambers of trauma. Slowly, therapy teaches him to play his pain in slower tempos— cross stick replacing gunfire’s crash cymbal, finding the spaces between beats where healing lives. VIII. The street musician's tabla bols create community from strangers— ta-ka-ta-ki-ta becomes the common language that transcends the babel of urban isolation. Each coin in his case a vote for the radical proposition that beauty matters more than efficiency— that rhythm is prayer accessible to all faiths all doubts. The autistic child constructs cathedrals from polyrhythms—three against two four against three— tiny wrists parsing the paradox of a world too loud to understand yet perfectly timed beneath its chaos. Each strike a syllable in a language her flam paradiddle-diddle hands dissecting chaos into latticework unspoken but truer than speech. Her fingers discovering order in the latticework of syncopation where logic and wonder share the same downbeat. She does not fidget— she improvises. She does not escape— she listens deeper. And in her palms the world becomes percussion— finally speaking in a dialect her heart can follow. ================== The Final Book 3 is coming.....
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Date: 7/23/2025 5:05:00 PM
Another beautiful poem, Daniel ... I'll be going to Book 3 next. I too believe that all circumstances in life can be handle if diluted to the proper level that is in harmony with the heart and soul of an individual. What seems impossible is overcome as we surrender to the will of our Creator and listen on His wavelength. We misunderstand because we are listening on the wrong frequency or listening in physical language instead of the universal language of Love. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 7/25/2025 7:18:00 AM
Dear Bill, your reflection sings in perfect harmony with the spirit of Book Two. You have such a gift for distilling big truths into quiet grace, and it means so much that you felt this rhythm with me. I’m humbled, truly. Book Three is waiting and I’ll carry your blessing into that one. Thank you, dear friend. Daniel
Date: 6/11/2025 5:52:00 PM
This is so brilliant, Daniel. Has such mind-boggling metaphors and examples.
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Date: 6/7/2025 2:04:00 AM
Dear Daniel, don't silence the drum. Keep its rhythm, its deep thoughts that I had to read twice. You're a master of poetry. Well done. A poem to be remembered. Waiting for part three.
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Date: 6/10/2025 10:52:00 AM
Dear Victor, Your words hit like a steady beat strong, grounding, and full of heart. Thank you for reading deeply, for listening twice. That means more than you know. Part three is posted, and I’ll carry your encouragement in every line. Grateful for your presence and your friendship, always. Blessings, Dear Victor, Daniel
Date: 6/6/2025 11:56:00 AM
David, a breathtaking penned creation. I am not gong to pretend I understoog all of it! But to write this intricate poem must be saisfying tou your soul, so keep it up. Your care for others I sense in your poems. That lat four lines is a description of me.)) but I have learned to rise above the clamor of humanity demanding I be other than who I am. Poent Pangie)) love your audio!!
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Date: 6/10/2025 10:50:00 AM
Dear Pangie, Your honesty and heart just shine, and I treasure both. I smiled so big reading your words and thank you for embracing the poem even when it twisted and turned. You are beautifully, powerfully you, and I’m honored to walk this poetic path with you. Grateful for your spirit, your eyes, and your ears! Blessings, Dear Pangie, Daniel
Date: 6/6/2025 11:17:00 AM
wow, I bow to your brilliance here, so much wisdom and understanding in every word Daniel
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Date: 6/10/2025 10:48:00 AM
Dear Rose, Your words, so few, yet they carried the weight of oceans. Thank you for seeing not just the poem, but the heart behind it. To be received with such grace and reverence by you means more than I can say. I bow right back, my friend, with gratitude and deep affection. Blessings, My Dear Rose, Daniel
Date: 6/5/2025 3:29:00 PM
Dearest Daniel, the second part is very deep and thought-provoking. The first stanza opening with this line “We are all metric modulations....”honestly hits right in the heart. This poem is breathtakingly beautiful! You've woven together a deep understanding of rhythm and music to create a masterpiece. The way you've explored the intersections of trauma, healing, community, and beauty is truly moving. Each section is a gem. Cannot wait to read part 3. With love and respect always, Anne
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Date: 6/6/2025 6:47:00 AM
Dearest Anne, your thoughtful and heartfelt response means more to me than words can fully express. I wanted to convey the heartbeat that connects us all through trauma, healing, and the beauty we find in community. Thank you for being such a cherished companion on this creative journey. Spring Blessings, My Dear Anne, Daniel
Date: 6/5/2025 11:01:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story you have here. Great Quote... Love your line, "Even after forgetting—we are the drum that cannot be silenced." So True... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 6/6/2025 6:44:00 AM
Dear Paula, Your words touched me deeply and thank you for embracing the heart of my poem with such warmth and insight. Your encouragement is a blessing on my writing journey for these rhythms we carry within us persist beyond memory, beyond time. May your days be equally filled with inspiration and gentle grace. Blessings, My Dear Paula, Daniel
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