The Hand That I've Been Dealt

The mirror used to be my friend;
Alas, those days have reached the end.
I see my face and can’t pretend
I’m anything but old.

I guess it’s me beneath the skin
That wrinkles somehow settled in
And make-up couldn’t quite begin
To spin this straw to gold.

My earrings still remain in place
And, just like always, frame my face,
But time will not let me erase
Its firm, relentless hold.

Yet I’m still in the living game.
The hand that I’ve been dealt I’ll claim
And, though I don’t look quite the same,
I’m not prepared to fold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 7/31/2025 4:42:00 PM
To me, you look like a royal flush. Nice write as usual.
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Date: 7/30/2025 7:10:00 AM
Men have this experience. too, Ilene. So you're not alone. Your take on it reminds me of my poem of some years ago. Don't fret, aging has many advantages – if only I could remember what they are!!! Thanks for the stop by./ Maurice
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Date: 7/30/2025 6:16:00 AM
I sent my mother your poem and this was her reply to me: Who is that in the mirror I see??? An old lady looking at me She's all creased and wrinkled But her eyes maintain a twinkle She remembers the candy"GOOD AND PLENTY' May She live till "A HUNDRED AND TWENTY' BUBBY B
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Date: 7/30/2025 7:02:00 AM
Ha! Sounds like I could be friends with your mom, Hannah!
Date: 7/29/2025 7:10:00 PM
I see you and raise you my folding chair...
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Date: 7/29/2025 6:10:00 PM
I sent this to my mother. She is you
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