The Fallen

The Fallen


He kneels before an granite stone
As if before a throne
He dreams of days of yesteryear 
But glad, now he is home
So many lads, had stayed behind
To never leave the field
And though their bodies, are lying here 
Their spirits never yields 

He see them as, they were back then, Young and strong and brave
Not what lie beneath this stone, Below this grassy grave
He knows they, are still on guard, He counts them all, as kin
And savers every day at home
Until he joins them, once again

He wipes away a single tear
As he stands up tall and straight
Remembering that dear young boy 
And his final fate
Although many years go by
And his brother has to wait
He promises it won't be long
Till he meets him at the gates
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Hello Jerry!! Very well-done here my friend!! A fantastic tribute for sure. Having had a full-career in U.S. Army (retiring in 1996), your rhyme verse here certainly tugged at my heart strings!! Good On Ya' Mate!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. I will write a verse on "Lucky in Love" as you suggested earlier. Should have it posted in a day or two.)
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Date: 3/24/2020 8:35:00 PM
Hello Jerry … lovely tribute indeed Jerry. On youtube, try and listen to a song called; The Band Played Waltzing Matilda; and Liam Clancy's version. It is so raw and moving - thank you Jerry - Lindsay
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/1/2020 9:36:00 AM
Hey Mate I did like you suggested and you're right, Liam is dead on (no pun intended) convincing. How are you holding up, Drought, Fire, Virus what next.....I feel like there's a poem in there somewhere ! Take care my friend
Date: 3/24/2020 12:36:00 PM
A fitting salute, well done Jerry...
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/1/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 3/24/2020 10:35:00 AM
What a great tribute to the heroes. Great poem!
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