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Image result for pictures of older women in nature

tanka

quiet time snippets
capture moments to relax....
changes in nature 
night releases dawn's faint light
monarch's fantasy in flight

introspectionsenryu

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2025 5:19:00 AM

- Lovely written, Sara :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2025 4:44:00 PM

Oh. It's like the ku you did. I like this one even more

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2025 3:43:00 AM

Andrea, I am glad you like this one even more. Strange thing is I started with a haiku one morning added the lines to be a Tanka then decided to separate them once again. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/29/2025 5:47:00 PM

captivating words with soft and beautiful imagery! I feel relaxed and at peace after reading your poem, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/30/2025 3:15:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I hope that the peace is still flowing. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/29/2025 1:36:00 PM

Hello Sara, Thanks for congratulating me on Vocal Piece Majestic placement. Your poem has an enduring quality which grows in stature on each reading. A picturesque atmosphere sustains itself. Excellent Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2025 4:48:00 PM

Your high regards are appreciated, Howard. I agree a picturesque place and atmosphere give a peace all its own. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/29/2025 12:33:00 PM

Lovely, descriptive poem, Sara. Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2025 4:47:00 PM

Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

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