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tanka

quiet time snippets capture moments to relax.... changes in nature night releases dawn's faint light monarch's fantasy in flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 5:19 AM
- Lovely written, Sara :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Oh. It's like the ku you did. I like this one even more
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Andrea, I am glad you like this one even more. Strange thing is I started with a haiku one morning added the lines to be a Tanka then decided to separate them once again. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:47 PM
captivating words with soft and beautiful imagery! I feel relaxed and at peace after reading your poem, hugs, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 3:15 AM
Why, thank you, Sara B. I hope that the peace is still flowing. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 1:36 PM
Hello Sara, Thanks for congratulating me on Vocal Piece Majestic placement. Your poem has an enduring quality which grows in stature on each reading. A picturesque atmosphere sustains itself. Excellent Howard
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 4:48 PM
Your high regards are appreciated, Howard. I agree a picturesque place and atmosphere give a peace all its own. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Lovely, descriptive poem, Sara. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 4:47 PM
Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
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